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Three chapters already and I'm already craving for more. I was looking for new books to add to my collection and I Found The perfect one. Nice and smooth story development. Looking forward to the more, author!
Great world backround, very interesting take on the dimensions idea & ascending worlds idea! Terrible characters tho, they are just absolutely terrible, especially the Protagonist! I'd recommend if u don't focus on Protagonists but the world backround more. But if u read books and care about that Protagonist too then don't read this one because this is a Protagonist with down syndrome. All in the name of "Character development" But this isent character development he is just a retard who is mentally Weaker than everyone else & will never get over his high-school crush & is one of the weakest mentally MC's you'll ever find. Of course he still suddenly becomes mentally rage whenever someone messes with the girl he likes tho as he is a SIMP!!!
Woah!! Such an amazingly written book
I'm glad someone said the Summary was wrong cause first think in the book on like the first line us talking about a guy and I'm like "Didn't it talk about a girl?"
it was obvious that there will always be a delay in the final moment... typical reader-bait plot, author treating the reader like a fish... I've seen many xinxias like this. You have to read until the end for a total romantic dishonor. Besides that this mc is pretty disgusting, if you analyze well, he won everything for free without effort, and still doesn't have much personality, despite being in the category of romances nominated for men, it's clearer a female domination with a dubious emaciated mc .
I liked the beginning of this story, but when he teleports to valheim it drops down for me.
Why dont he takes care of his believers, but goes down some stupid sidestory that goes on and on, where you may think that the sidystory delevops to the mainstory and his believers to some random talks that pops up sometimes?
Same copy paste billion times novel. Nothing original....
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While others needed several thousand years to cultivate Mythic Level cultivation methods, Clive only needed one year. Earth warriors: “Clive’s cultivation speed is inhuman, why is he able to become the strongest in the world just by casually cultivating for a bit?!” Interstellar cultivators: “Since when did such a supreme, unparalleled prodigy appear in this universe!? It’s only been one year! He had exceeded our cultivation levels by an immeasurable margin!” From then, Clive became the most famous legend of this world.
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*Clive told his secret then. Initially, he found that he had a trace of yellow/Chinese blood. As he kept on upgrading the Chinese bloodline level, cultivation became easier. And when his bloodline became Ancient Chinese, he could cultivate Chinese Qi. This was a mysterious energy far more effective than one available on Earth/in Universe. With it, he was able to cultivate Tao, which later on turned into Dao and ultimately, returned to origin and became essence of Chinese high school textbooks.* Then he was invincible in the universe.
A very interesting story about virtual reality. Would definitely recommend for all readers. Nice plot, and storyline. Can't wait for the next chapter. All the best for the author.
Overall very interesting be it plot or story but do beware that this kind of MC is not for everyone, if you like righteous MC who would at least try to save someone in trouble, if he could just by snapping his finger then you came to the wrong place WRONG PLACE I say, if that's not what you want then go read this book already you don't need to know more than this!!!
Ps:I deleted original review bc it's 2am and I wrote like 20 mistakes
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