So, I tapped the link of your novel and it sent me to chapter eleven. Is this suppose to happen or is there something wrong with your link? Anyways, the author asked for a character review so I'll definitely do his request.Based on what I've read, the character descriptions are decent but I feel like you could add more instead of writing "unknown man" just like in chapter twelve. Perhaps you could write, "A man wearing a coat of black sees Mandeep waking up from the machinery he is attached to. He catches the attention of the man beside him. The strange man murmurs, My ultimate creation is bla bla bla and things like that" Something like that but still, I'll be rating it five stars. Perhaps instead of (:) You could use (") instead.This is just a suggestion and it's still up to you. :)))Keep up the good work and soon you'll be a great author!
My first thought when I read the first chapter was this is new and I love it. Highly recommend this book to those out there who love sci-fi. I promise you won't regret it. keep it up Author Tan.
I appreciate how much people read my novels despite being that short of collections but It doesn't matter to me because I just like what I'm do
Same as many other novels i had the unfortunate experience to read today just waste of times and low effort not getting anyone to edit or spell checker sites you perfect your synopsis and first ch then after that you stop caring and its dumb just dont write ag that point sorry if this is harsh but i have many other novels like this in my library that i read one after the other from intrest to be let down
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