I haven't read it yet, but an advice for you. Just Add a synopsis so that readers will read your story. I will come back and change my review after that.
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Great Story. Characters were real and came to life. And I’ll bet a million bucks you would nevEr guess the eNding. If You d….Youre a genuus
(This may be a long review)
Story:
Great! It's quite interesting and the war(s) are simply beautiful. The MC in the beginning (the few chapters) is cute and innocent, but you'll see her scheming mind very soon. The "acting to be godfather" is hilarious. I recommend the author to continue write the funny parts.
Update pace:
Pls update about 5 chapters a day...(๑′°︿°๑) XDXD nah, I'm joking. The pace is great, but sometimes I really want the author to update 1000000 chapters today...
Characters:
Nice and wholesome. The MC treats her people like family, and I love it. Some book's MC just use their people, but Ain cares so much for them (later on).
overall:
You'll never get bored by reading this. They're are funny and easy to understand, with unexpected events happening (The God damn WAR). I love it!
is Interested
Subverting the expectation of a Hero's Journey, Fallen Stars follows three lively protagonists: Draco, Wrath and Vega. Join them as they embark on a journey to Change The World! What could that mean? Keep reading to find out what this ominous goal entails. An ambitious tale with something for everyone to enjoy. Definitely recommend reading if youre a fan of action/adventure!
I hope this gets picked.......................................................................................................................
I read it's raw untill ch. 700+, First of all it's YURI, you'll get good laugh there are funny misunderstanding, except it's Female Protagonist all story flows like ordinary Shounen novel.
Great novel...... ....... awesome character.............but it's mtl..........., football legends have been properly demonstrated.... ..
The translation is not bad. Story development cliche as much as possible it could be, poor guy gained system with which he could become an almighty dragon. Not much into a description of how he looks or what he thinks when doing things. Not much about world background. I'm bad at writing reviews because I have cancer from reading this kind of novels, but still from what I read so far this book is bad so not waste your time for it.
Fallout 4 : I must save my daughter and take revenge for my wife/husband ... 5 min later oh a scraps, and an other one and here too.
Genius daddy : I must save my daughter and my wife .... 2 min later ohhh a face to slap, and an other one, I really need to slap this face
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So 3 things here:
1. Idk if I've been living under the rock but this is the first time I've heard about a video game novel ~ very interesting