It has close to no grammatical errors except for a few spelling mistakes. It's a nice take on the quirkless world of mha but nothing new. Though it does have the potential to be a great fanfic. Just try not make the MC too overpowered too early. The pace at which you're going is just right. Great work and please don't drop the fanfic.
the book has a great structure adding with the author's mind set I say I will recommend this book
the author took time organizing he's imagination it's a super
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after 1st 40 chapters language quality become so poor that you couldn't even understand what author is trying to convey.
It is better to not read this novel at all,since it is a waste of time.
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The male lead is amazing! His training is very slow, but he'll surely become very powerful in the future, and in the meantime, he has the wits and intelligence to make up for it!
I just want to say that the way you wrote your story is absolutely mesmerizing. I find myself getting dragged upon by the waves that are your writing. Please keep up the good work!
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pretty good novel with decent character development and storyline. Shame translators god greedy and decided to go premium and stopped releasing free chapters after ch 266. Not worth the 12 spirit stones per chapter
I want to talk about how this novel was written, and that was carefully and well planned. I'll admit that the plot isn't really anything new, but the writing shows the care the author placed in this work of literature. The reactions of the characters match their age and nothing is taken overboard or things are introduced to make everything seem subtle, much like it would seem in real life. Evens the side characters are somewhat built upon as the author made mention to the side characters past, in a way that didn't detract from the story. They have written magical realism in the best way possible by introducing all characters to some level of intelligence and to ensure that the obvious hidden meanings people would say in regular conversation comes out.
I've read many light novel but as far as magical realism goes this takes the cake. The plot seems to be like other clichés but just written in a logical way, they have others remain fairly oblivious to slight insults or snide remarks the Mc to and from the MC.
This isn't some person writing a chunni fantasy, rather it's a person creating through a singular perspective a whole new world.
If I happened to not mention this before then I will now. This story is great, well written and should be read.
Yeah I just really enjoyed this story.
Overall the novel i'll give it a 7/10 from its writing alone I can tell that be author have some experience with handling its character, some my issued are the grammar need some improve but further reading I guess Author fix some of them.
Too bad it's only 50chps it would be nice if were full blown series with at least 100+ chps. my only tips I can give is that expand more with r world building & characters I'm sure some of your new titles will surely be better.
Not bad