Great book trying to figure out when it’ll be updated again tho like it’s supposed to be a chapter a week set updates but it been 20 days and nothing
for ****'s sake i thought we had this novel in the bag!! HOW FUCKING BLIND IS YOU GOTTA BE TO NOT PICK THIS NOVEL? IS WEBNOVEL RETARDED OR WHAT?
IS WEBNOVEL RETARDED OR WHAT?
IS WEBNOVEL RETARDED OR WHAT?
IS WEBNOVEL RETARDED OR WHAT?
20Th birthday picked up a little girl, 10 Years later he is only 24. Some hut shit here. Mad respect to the MC. The Translator or the Author must be trolling.
Trash translation. Average repetitive novel. Shameless copying if names and elements from other novels.
CN authors remind me of authors during the Shakespeare Era when copyright didn’t exist and authors would just steal content from each each other.
Author here, I just want to thank all you for reading my novel. English is not my native language, so I hope you will forgive me for my grammatical errors and misuse of words sometimes.
Please read at least 80 chapters before dropping, because It's my first novel, so the first chapters aren't that great. But it gets better with time. You will like it.
Now Some Spoilers..
1. This novel is going to be an R-18 Harem novel with lots of mature content.
2. No Rape, No NTR,
3. MC is OP, smart, calm, not rushing things, don't provoke everyone he meet, ruthless to the enemy, have pervert nature and soft spot for women.
4. There will be not much arrogant young masters in this novel like other Xianxia novels. (Hate it)
5. He will not leave any girl behind, a little separation but later reunion.
I hope to improve more and more to give you a good story. Thanks again to everyone, and hopefully, you enjoy it as much as I enjoy writing.
even though only 10 chapters released so far. author starts with interesting story line...
I look forward to the rest of chapters to be released...
Author-san
Novel is interesting... An MC who good with plans & sticks with his fighting style... Villians with their own unique personaloties & reasons for their actions... The only time the flow of the novel suffered was when the author tried to be mysterious about Zeke when we knew it was him... We could guess how & whose body he used to comeback to life... Those few chapters took me over a month to read because it destroyed the flow of the novel... Just about to finish that part hopefully it gets good again...
Give this a shot
The Mtls good
The Chinese ver. Gets updated 1 chap a day go give it a try.
You'll like it as Webnovel is lacking good novels these days
Okay...let me be blunt. 1. The first three chapters are important. 2. The first three chapters are very important. and 3. The first three chapters, while important, aren't that significant to the beginning of the story...sorta...
This is a story about a guy who decides to turn professional gamer. Unfortunately, (refer to chaps 1-3) he did some very childish things when he was a kid fresh out of school. Now that he's older, he's trying to ignore that part of his life with the latest, hottest VRMMO. Then karma comes and bites him in the...y'know... ^_^
You might not like the MC. His personality is abrasive and brash and hasn't really mellowed that much from that prologue, but he's a very realistic character and very entertaining. You might feel snarly about how he treats his sister's BF, but if she was my sister, I'd act the same way.
Basically, this is an entertaining VRMMO story about a sorta reformed troll trying to trod the straight and narrow (and failing rather humorously). Totally hope it gets a full pickup because I did laugh quite a bit while reading of his misadventures (Katrina...lol...).
Pretty good so far. Writing quality is very good; I did not notice any mistakes. The MC seems quite interesting, and it compels the reader to want to read more. Keep on writing author; you're doing good!
I love this story! Can’t wait to see how far it goes. This makes me just want to read more and more! The story is so fun and interesting to read, the way it makes you feel while you read it is crazyyyyyy!!!!!
almost zero world explaining, just feels rushed . the writing is horrible on god I can't read this without spitting out mouthful of blood every couple sentences too hard to read just feels like mtl I have read only 5 chapters and I still don't understand where he is at or how he got there skips way too much detail.....