Nice writing. U have great imagination author. With constant update, i think this story will be amazing. The story is also very creative. It's very well written. Good job
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Will I say the synopsis made me wanna read and then I read the prologue and damn!! I want to read more. Good job Author, your story already caught my attention and I’d be reading more and coming back to review
Great novel, very good, it may be a little confusing but I managed to understand some parts, it is just info dumping but it's a good novel, check it out
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As an avid fan of dungeons and SS heroes, I enjoyed the fact the man is cold to everyone but his son. The child is like the breath of fresh air that makes this story different from other OP hero novels.
And while the goal of the MC is unclear, I definitely wouldn’t mind reading more of this in my free time.
You have a great potential, Author ! So keep it up !
As much as I've read till now it's definitely promising. Starting from the concepts, characters, grammar they all give off an exciting vibe. Well, we only have 3 chapters till now. I'm still waiting for more chapters.Keep it up, Chandu mah boi
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I can do it too!
Its good. Back to reading
All the preview chapters are filled with begging for stones and coins to unlock the first chapter with any actual content. This author is obviously Being pushed up by the app if he can get so many positive Reviews with the novel in the state its in. He literall stated in the second chapter that he wont post anything if his precived level of appropriate support is not met. Entitled without proof of skill sir.
your story is something, I like to read to be honest, I would like to see how far it will grow.so far there not else to talk about for now until futher more chapter's have been read.