Love the story so far. Been enjoying it. Stable updates and if a day is missed a double is released the next day.I love the concept of the world and how you have used science to explain certain things. It makes it a lot more realistic. The MC seems to have a plan and follows, there is always a logical reason for his each and every action. Smart Mc and smart Author. There are often some grammar issues but it is not off putting. I believe in the potential of this story and I'm just here to voice(write) my appreciation. Please continue to write don't ever lose hope. Ps: I added this book to my library if that wasn't already implied.
Don't read this novel, chapters only consist of badly edited machine translation, bad world background, worse character development, and inconsistent cultivation stage.
The way author keeps on switching perspectives and repeats the last chapter at the beginning of the next one makes it difficult to read.
It's makes novel read so bad that I can't help but feel like it's purpose is to farm word count.
Im still on chap 13 waiting for more chaps to binge this is fun and great story and the mc feels real and is overall entertaining to read about plot is a 10/10 currently only issue is it feels a little slow paced at first but its important to the story overall grammar and writing is great and the world building will be insane in the future
Very nice historian concept of writing,just read to chapter 4 but like it so far.Keep up,cause readers will want to read more
so till vol 1 i find this novel enjoyable.
it is a bit light hearted novel with enjoyable wholesome moments.
mc got a nice family and is a prodigy although he likes to take nap too often.
update rate is also constant.
so all in all a very good novel.
It was going good at beginning but later parts just makes you work your brain not to feel stupid lol. No fixed cultivation style; magic, qi, then science, underworld and even Norse mythology lol and it just keeps going.
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Writing quality you need to work on.
Other than the second chapter, you need some other clinchers. Otherwise you're gonna lose a lot of attention just from the first chapters.
Like me. I lost interest since it was kind of turning into a slice of life.
You can turn it into a slice of life later on, when the readers get attached to your characters that they don't care what they're doing.
For now, I don't see anything interesting.
Good story though
This is purely amazing. Heartwrenching and comedic.
Gabe deserves what he is getting. I love Tamiko's turn and can't wait to see him in vengeance full mode. [img=update][img=update]
I loved the story up until it rebooted with no warning
hey author is there any sexual scenes plz tell me i am going to start reading it