First review but from what ive read the best kingdom building novel thier is. Its not only about killing and fighting. Please carry on dont drop it.
bro did you stop updating.please update chapters the novel is good
I like the pace of the story, not too fast or too slow, no info dump. MC is very relatable and not a generic OP mad lad from the start.
MC lacks brain
(he brings phones from dead martial artists, doesn't know why a bird is chasing him when is carrying a giant egg and more)
but the personality is good atleast.
also, the cheat is gradually improving hin, after 35 chapters he has become a level 10 player in game terms.
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When i first saw the Cover and Name i thought this would be like every other System Novel around here but apon a recommendation from a freind and reading the Summery i must say this novel keeps blowing me away! The comedy is spot on and dosnet pull any punches which i adore. Every new chapter seems to draw me deeper into the world and made me genuinely care about the Protagonist of this story and relate to the obstacles he must go through to move on. The Foreshadowing and the Suspense building makes me eagerly wait every new Chaper release to get my fix and with the speed in which the chapers are releasing i must say their is never a dull moment in my reading sessions as i eagerly await a chaper update notification while at home or at work. This has some Amazing potential and i cant wait to be here as it rises the ranks to the top!
So as a summery, Amazing Pacing aswell as comedy and character development, sprinkle in the Occasion NSFW scenes and suspense and you have what i consider one of if not the best up and coming Novel ive read! I highly recommend this to anyone looking for a good novel to sink their litterary teeth into you wont regret it!
P.s Sorry for how long this reveiw this is my first one and this novel is so good i could resist writing one down! you could say this novel took my first~
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Im rating this with just 2-star because translators just edited this from a chinese novel...Why don't you just guys steal novels from other country?
This is going to be one of my favorite novels from now, I loved the way the author explains her characters in detail and interesting manner. The plot and story are very fun to read.
This story is very similar to "I Really Am Not The Lord of Demon" However the MC is aware of what he does. This Novel has its moments and I fall in love with some scenes... But the MC is contradictory... Hypocritical? He plays both Teams so it doesn't make much sense. He can be cruel when it's convenient for him. The world-building also lacks a huge explanation so people assume it's 'Modern Chinese Government' or something. No, it's a supernatural world setting with its supernatural department that naturally gives freedom to people.
But the contradictions also hurt.. MC says he loves freedom as it builds up the person and society.. But next thing you know they're already heavily surveillance on MC. It's as if telling you it's fine for the Government to watch you, they're "good people and have good reason'' to do so... That's not freedom or is ok lol. It just feels like lowkey propaganda or something.
This one is really onteresting and pretty unique. Kinda like outdoor webcaster, but it focuses more on hunting than slice of life unlike Outdoor Webcaster
Its deviated from the original idea. What originally should have been about a fallen immortal running a wine store has instead morphed into a story where the wine store aspect has been sidelined in favour of ‘sect building’. Like what the **** author? I came here to read about what was written in the synopsis not some bullshit xianxia novel where the protagonist builds a sect with the system aspect only being there to give him quick powerups.
An example being how the system missions were previously all about making wine and the betterment of the store deviating and becoming some random bullshit like “Explore the Fallen Immortals Cave where there are items useful for your cultivation!”
Summary: Used to be a unique novel that stayed true to its synopse only to regress into a typical xianxia novel where the protagonist unwittingly collects a harem and the system is relegated into being an object that serves no other purpose other than to be the source for the protagonists miraculous powerups.
I decided to review this so as to clear some myths. Some idiots who read few initial chapters made some claims about this novel. This is for future readers so that they don't get duped.
True this novel is similar to Astral pet store..... about 60-70% similar but not same or exactly similar. Those who haven't read astral pet store don't have to concern themselves with any nonsense and just read this. This novel isn't like other popcorn system novels out there. System isn't OP and helps(or tortures) MC in regards only to pet/pet shop. MC is sensible and not arrogant dickhead. Characters have decent personality. Power system is well defined. World building has some serious potential. Also there are some cliche plots here so though not a perfect but an enjoyable read.
Now coming to those who have read Astral pet store. I am currently at chapter 447(reading MTL after chapter 351). If you read this novel for few chapters you may think it is same but it isnt if you read it to the latest chapter i.e. 90. MC's personality here and in astral pet store is quiet different and also his sister. the backstory behind the sibling's relationship is different. The circumstances of their parents is also different and also the family friend, there is no1 in astral pet store. The connections MC has in this novel is different than in Astral pet store, girls here are falling for MC slowly unlike in Astral pet store where we don't have anything of such sorts yet. Now talking about events.... events are similar but in essence different. The exhibition match is different. There is no Momomga in that novel. MC has all together different pets as compared to astral pet store. The relationship between MC and angelina is quite different than their counterparts in astral pet store. Also the extent of Angelina's power, her mobility all these are completely different as in astral pet store. Even the current event of inheritance is entirely different if readers have read though the thing about inheritance is similar. The allies and the enemies MC has are also different.
I have mentioned all those things that this novel is different than astral pet store...... One could say this is a fan fic of that novel or inspired from that novel. If you binge read this novel then it will appear to be entirely same but if you read it carefully and give this novel time then you will know that ideas are similar but execution is entirely different. Events are similar but what exactly happens is entirely different. So it doesn't matter if you have read astral pet store or not this novel is a good read.
Also the grammar, writing style, narrations is much better in this novel..... Only thing i felt is astral pet store has better and exciting action scenes which this novel lacks but i think that it is just 90 chapters so we might see better action in future....