I used the last remaining power to soften the fall with the help of air magic.
Tarne tell Olaf all thing that happen when he try to take the axe.
"D-don't you hate me now?"
A goddamn masterpiece, this novel always make my day with so many unexpected turn of events and comedy, I wonder why it only ranked 41. Hope this novel can enter top 10 soon : )
Reading your work is always a pleasure – it's engaging, insightful, and beautifully written. Keep it up!"
Love the story and the main character. The first 10 chapters were changed, which is a shame, as it seemed interesting, but such as life. The edit to the first 10 wasn't bad either, so 5 stars!
Its not really an 'Inn' its much more like a cultivation strip mall.It takes about 150 chapters before MC really even starts cultivating. The level of the facilities in the 'inn' are dependent on his cultivation level. So he basically is forced to make a strip mall with a ton of services that no-one really cares about initially.Other than low level nobodies, no-one is really impressed with the inn except for the fact it has higher Qi than earth. but only earth, nowhere else. Interesting concept but MC is forced to try to wring out every ounce of $ he can from customers. It would of been better if he was given points based off how well the customers enjoyed the inn
wrong names, incomprehensible sentences, terrible grammar, despite the story seemingly interesting but its too hard to keep reading
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I can't read this the info dump and the Mc who Is 12 looks like 16 acting as if he's 4 and why now is he learning this where I'd he what's his story? (the beginning) please try and read what you made the and like me if you can't handle more than 2 chapters of info-dumping space it out! concept seemed great though.
As tradition, i'm leaving a review on my fanfiction. I started this fanfiction because i wanted to read some fanfictions about fairy tail. I got inspired so i started writing even though i don't a laptop or computer, even now i'm writing using my cp and a bluetooth keyboard so when i lost motivation, i don't write anything. if you have some corrections then i'll accept it since i'm a beginner in writing.That's all. Thank you for reading and good health to everyoneSayonara
"For his wishes, he asked for the battle experience of Madara Uchiha, a unique "Demon Eyes" blue Sharingan blending with Hozuki DNA, Lava Style, waterbending akin to Avatar, Magnet Style, and talent equivalent to Madara."??????????????????????????????????