A little bit of confused about this novel but I'm interesting to read it.. I think is an othe kind of good novel.. Thank you author for another suspended and exciting novel
Love this story so far. If it was updated more often this would be a great book but it is still a great read for anyone with enough time. I also love the concept behind the book and would love to see where it goes. Please keep writing it.Thanks
Very naive. Written by a child, because I don't suspect an adult of such naivety. Descriptions and lack of details and lack of maturity in descriptions. A story for children, and very naive children at that. Adults will get bored after a few pages. Unfortunately, my rating is low as is the quality of this thing.
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Should be the best amongst the current trial reads if you exclude the world tree. Unique premise and decent world background and characters. Only flaw is fairly extreme plot armor and insane luck in unimaginable areas.
I like how the story develops but the lack of chapters is saddening. I will keep supporting it though just to make the author update more chapters.
Shameless Author review here: This is my creative world. Anything and everything can happen here. The MC is not a dunce nor is he very smart. He's an average human who cultivates his Magic Arts till he transcends the Heavens and reach an even higher realm at the end. If you want a relaxing read, this might be for you. I've already plan finished several arcs of the future and my MC is still single because I don't know how to romance. So yeah, do bear with me till I finish the first volume. The real story starts at the 2nd volume.
Thanks for the story. Don't drop.................................................................................................................................
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t wait tell you write the next chapters soon so please write them soon so I’ll be able to read it soon and please don’t stop writing this book
Let's get the big one out of the way first, the grammar is not the best. You are a new writer and English isn't your first language so you cant be blamed. The story and its characters are interesting and you are good at world-building, keep up the good work :)
Question… is invayne really human?
harem? really? those are actually difficult to write in a non immersion breaking way. It's usually not believeable in execution and often drags the novel down. Also, even if your pets are humanoid, it's still messed up to do things like that with them.