Don't bother to read this trash.................The novel status is Hiatus maybe dropped at Chap 251..............Just not worth a single penny ===============================================================================================================================================================================================================================
grammar is worse than mtl its the thing that made me stop reading this.
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decent potential but you need an editor and proof-reader
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Ot was entertaining until chapter 40 that become Mtl. Just another scam
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My uncle is a cultivation big shot:
But he took a sleeping beauty to his room and now has a peerless std
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The idea of side effect is good but the translator or the author did a really bad job, it's all over the place and hard to understand also the mc is sexualy attracted by a little girl ........
The Story is well written. I like that the MC is not way to OP like in other stories. Comfy pace. However you should try to upload more frequently.
ITS TOTAL UNCULTURED. Although its not his real mother but he gave her to another person. What a bad plot. Its totally not worth reading. People please dont read this.
1. Bad story
2. Bad attitude
3. Bad plot
4. Bad relationship
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I look forward to the continuation of the story dear author
I look forward to the continuation of the story dear author
I look forward to the continuation of the story dear author
Honestly couldn't read this novel only has MC finds something asks in chat full of low IQ what that is it was funny 1-2 times but tooo repetitive bored dropped
First of all this is a great novel and I will continue to read it. That being said my following criticism should be seen as constructive and not judgemental or destructive.
1. Forgetable/Mobs characters receive to much words and in certain cases their traits and mannerisms becomes indistinguishable from the main character. The way the writer writes dialogue further exacerbates this, making it hard for readers to distinguish between characters - especially during dialogue.
2. The MC becomes aware of knowledge that he should not be aware of. This can be easily fixed by simply indicating that he is not aware of this and that this is the knowledge of the future MC bleeding into he’s own recounts of his past, because technically the MC is writing his own story about his past self. The author is fixing this in later chapters.
Those two points are my bigest criticisms.