Cloudcould

I have really enjoyed this book. Story is about a guy who is a human robot hybrid that can control machines. One journey through a wormhole later he discovers a world of magic and dragons goblins etc... MC is a "bit" more overpowered than is strictly necessary (that is one sentence I never thought I would type seriously) overall it has the excitement you would hope for while reading the book description.
Pros:
overpowered mc
Great writing quality
Great action scenes
Characters are believable
Cons:
Author makes MC too powerful early in the story I expect to see some classic plot devices later on into the story to make up for this problem.

The actual technology building mechanics and in depth planning are somewhat lacking.
Overall I found it to be an amazing story definitely worth checking out!

A very fun read, ive already spent half the morning reading all 60 chapters in one sitting. Everything so far has been A+; From character development to the details of the world and the battle sequences. Lots of humour, but at the same time moments are very serious and chill inducing. Cant wait to read more of this novel!

Hey, Author..can you continue the story.. For ME, your novel is fun and amazing.. I hope you can update more and put some more romance and action in the plot

starting to get good hope theres more chapters soon ....................................................................................…...………...

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to be an official disciples, you have to give this recruitment book a 5 star and reach the peak of EXP IMMORTAL.

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Overall 3.3The title, synopsis, system and cover are pretty much all lies. I don’t see clicking to level up or get points. The system is the default except it can level up with points. MC doesn’t use the system much to jam in background and characters. It is not easygoing, etc to read. It’s dry expository, like reading a diary of someone’s life.Writing 3.5Rounded up to 4. Seriously though, why with the sentence fragments, especially when describing the uncle?Updating 5It says 18/week. Quality beats quantity. Slow down and read over your writing. If you feel nothing, or it doesn’t have any moments that stick out, you need to fix that.Story 1When there is a system, especially when hyped up this much, readers expect it to lead the MC’s decisions. Since the premise is flawed and the system is both shafted and underwhelming, you get nothing.Characters 3.5Rounded up to 4. MC is shown to be mature but puts his golden finger second to his ongoing day, as if anyone getting a second chance wouldn’t try exploiting or even exploring their system in the spare moments they have. Too many people looking down on MC for my taste. There aren’t enough normal people to interact with, and MC is lowkey despite his previous ambitions of grandeur.Background 3.5Rounded up to 4. Moments get slowed down because passages must be dedicated to descriptions. The pacing can be improved if descriptions are more dynamic and concurrent instead of the static and stale showcasing there is now.

I just love how each characters have strong personalities and how adorable all the guardians are, wish everyone could be more monstrous and powerful

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I like the book but you should update chapters more frequently keep on writing I support you and waiting for you to update chapters I hope your story become very popular

The story is full of holes, then he does not know the name of the weapon, after a few chapters it turns out that he is a super military man who went through hard training and can feel relaxed during interrogation. In general, the authors have problems with the personality of the protagonist.

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Should have just quit the job and let them regret it lol (: