Other than some spelling and grammer mistakes this novel is one of the best novel for a light read. Dont want to add spoilers to spoil the fun and can only say that you will not regret it
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This is the author with a shameless 5 star review (I don't think there is any author who wouldn't give his story 5 stars) so I'll review it in steps.
MAIN CHARACTER-
The protagonist Rey is a genius with an idiotic behaviour and is quite annoying. I also get annoyed by him. But there is a backstory which I hope to explore and there is a reason for his actions, so if you could bear with him.
It is not weak to strong because the mc is already strong but there will be change in his attitude and behaviour which will help him become a better version of himself. The MC will not be completely op for now, might change depending on what I feel and what you guys say.
PLOT-
The plot, to understand easily will be like a vrmmorpg but in a real world without any tower or dungeons (if that makes it easier). There are many novels in which there is a system that can talk but I wanted to create a system which is very much human and isn't defined by the system rules, so the plot for me is pretty interesting.
WRITING-
Now this is tricky. I won't say I am good or what I have written is good because I still don't think what I have written is good enough. So that is something you guys will have to read and decide. But I do know that 50 chapters later the writing won't be the same cause I will try to improve on it.
PACING-
I honestly don't know whether I am going slow or fast because I try to be as descriptive as possible so that you as readers can imagine what I am thinking and that might make it slow paced. I am fairly new, so sometimes it might be fast or sometimes slow.
ROMANCE-
There won't be a harem and romance will not be coming anytime soon. Though there is and the first to guess, I'll add your character in the story.
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I read (tried to read it actually) this novel for the first few chapters. Some translations remind me of the good ol' MTL which I missed for a while. Writing style makes it seem like it is a parody of the System genre.
Kinds clear it's your first time writing pretty good job so far, for an first timer
Story seems to be pretty good so far. No useless young masters. Has a few cliches, but they aren't done poorly. At least as of chapter 20, it appears to be worth reading. Give it a shot.
The translation so far is good although the system is nothing new the low starting point is pretty good and the relationship with his disciple is cute I want more
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One of the best I've read so far thank you for this and I hope you continue with yourgenius mind to make this novel not onlytouch my heart but others to bring them to a world of your creation thank you again. Also I hope you are loved by many and more thank you from one below the shadow's
The Only problem i have is that i cant read any Other novel after this. This one set the bar too high. The Mc iS super sMart and the side characters have perfect depth.