Mc has no motive to do anything, making it hard to invest in the story or conflict. Mc would rather be sleeping. systems with personalities are double-edged swords. If done right, it can enhance if wrong it can hurt,but the system can't be the only driving force of the Mc growth.
Easily the best original novel on the website right now. Yes, I've read the top one's, and the only one that comes close is the Oracle Paths. I won't even try and list the reasons. If you keep trying different novels over and over and face palming, or young kids being sexualized - or characters lacking backbone, or mindless murderers(btw reverend insanity is not the same hehe) etc etc. This is the same high stakes novel with a more reasonable touch instead of whatever other description you want to give to those others. I want to give it a 4.9 because nothing is perfect, but I can't so a 5 will do.
To put things into perspective - it's slow(as LOTM was at least in the beginning - also author realized story was a bit on the slow side in recent chapters and already started to adapt) but it flows so well. One of the few novels I look forward to reading. Hopefully the writing quality remains the same.
Okay, okay, let me start off by saying that this was a really pleasant read! :D
Let's start with the writing. Absolutely delightful! :D The writing is descriptive enough for me to be immersed in the story and setting, but clear enough for me to be able to understand the concept hehe :D
Okay, and then the characters. Most of the characters are really charming, and I gotta say, especially the protagonist hehe! I really really really like a cunning, smart MC who actually plans ahead and who weighs their option before doing something.
And then for the world-building and the concept, I'd say it's pretty good! It's pretty easy to digest, and very well-prepared.
Added to the library hehe! Will read more after I drop this review! Great work, author! <3
Raw Title: 网游之倒行逆施
Status: 3242 (Completed)
No mk Saini on the contemporary earth and the same thought it might take to hai kya logo this story is based upon its a very expensive than simply
Pretty funny. It delivers the synopsis, though it gets a little bit boring after a while, since it's mostly just about the business aspect of things and kids TV shows.
Perhaps it'll get better after chapter 60? I'm not sure, I dont really have high hopes for this to be picked.
This book is doing rAther well and i am totally loOking forward to more. character development is in its way along With some romance and the begining of The MCs career. i like how hes not entirely reliebt on his system but wOuld enjoy seeing more development with that too. yay and best wishes! ♥️♥️♥️♥️
realy i want read book like reverend insanity and search no and this book not good if u like cliches read and dont use brain
clasical harem i think one girl say no other girs say yes later firs girl say yes but boy say no soo i think first 60 eppisode we meet 10 beautiful girl and again i think 3 eppisode auction and 4-5 eppisode competition in clan :) i think we see 300 eppisodes after full cliche"s used :D :( puffy brained chinese novel run after puffy catche puffy and run after again another puffy :S
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Dear God I'm hooked I've read a lot of stories in my day and I can tell this is one fantastic story just started reading it today and couldn't stop in till I was done in for the long hall on this one please don't stop all my power stones coming your way
interestin^concept and necromancers are good in stories.
interestin^concept and necromancers are good in stories.
interestin^concept and necromancers are good in stories.
interestin^concept and necromancers are good in stories.
interestin^concept and necromancers are good in stories.
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