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I can't read it , it is so bad. You worship the MC of the original story too much , so your OC/SI is pretty much a wimp. You just keep praising Fang Yuan like you want to marry him or something . I get it that you like that character but what's the use of writing an SI/OC character if you are just planning on making him a wimp to worship your favourite character. Fang Yuan was a reincarnated 500 year old person but he was still in school and weak at the start , while your SI/OC has complete future knowledge and is the grandson of a Rank 3 master , yet your SI/OC fears him like he is some God . "Looked at him at the awakening ceremony and got Scared" such a wimp SI/OC.
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this is already good from the start, please do a mass release.............................................,.................................
didnt read the story yet but just wanted to comment about how this novel ends with exactly 69 chapter .lol
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I read all the free chapters through force. I didn't get hooked. Not my cup of tea.You can read. Average novel.Doctor, doctor, would you rather tell me how much you measured out, how much you put in, how much more do I need to see the sunrises? Doctor, how long do I have to live?
it's good but it's filled with lot of nonsense like who cares about future generations thats the first thing he thinks about?he hasn't even become a master level and is a weakling but still recklessly attracting attention iron Beast now he even wants to evolve green worm public he does realize that he is only able to compete because of this special evolution methods and skills and he is just agrees to increase others profiency in skills it's kind of a wonder and unrealistic that he hasnt been targeted by people after causing so many commotion and he says he doesn't like to be popular? lot of unnecessary things have been added and name of growth level and others keep changing and confusing why not just stick with one? and being famous only mostly bought him unnecessary trouble and is not really that useful he didn't really receive much benefits for giving evolution methods isnt it better to keep it private and sell on his own instead?
well, the mc is just basically clueless of how strong he is. and the others dont tell him cause theyre misunderstainf everything. wonder when will the mc realized hes so strong? it can get really old really fast.
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Author i read until the end of the sorrows of our era (chpt 370)...i really enjoy overall this book but WHY....WHY do you have to push the story by making the stupid...in earlier chapters he was thinking before he did **** he had a thought process...and now he loses it at the most critical moment for no reason...he ignores all signs of danger he doesnt use the s****w for battle but his own body ...i dont understand why do you rush things Ren's purpose was to get stronger so he can protect his brother when did all that gone to ****? He doesnt even try to power up the last 50chapters...you can write a great story...step back and LET THE CHARACTERS BREATHE!!!
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This book is hilarious....I love it❤❤❤❤❤❤