Very good story but I can tell that the story doesn't click with me. Might try to read more later but will probably not. Hopefully this gets finished and not dropped.
The story has many to the reader forced moments. If the author has an idea he does it as easy as possible, even breaking established character behaviour. His power ups are correlating to the plot the MC has 40000+ Intelligence, but it doesn't improve his IQ even a bit. The auction house scene was so forced just to progress the plot,that I wished I could have strangled the MC and that he just takes the first random beautiful girl with a similar background as him as his girlfriend was cringe worthy. I'm actually hoping each chapter that she just dies off, which obviously will never happen. The main reason is they both act as 13 year old ***** teenagers even with their tortured past and she is used as a reason to make him soft. I read the story only because I have nothing left at the moment I'd personally rate this story around 2.8, but with many unjustified 5 stars in my opinion. I lowered my rating world from background 3 character design 2 and update stability 5. By the way I think 5 stars total are too much for most stories on this site and the stars are overinflated for liked stories, which is sad because stars lose their meaning this way.
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................…. ........... Even its a considered a short story........it definitely a satisfying reading pleasure..
Thank you , for this wonderful story. Lots of love
I really like the story and the idea behind it especially the dragon elements and the proficiency panel that it's only job is to show you your status levels and proficiency value.
Ok , l have been reading this story for quite sometime now. I didn't have any interest in it till l got to chapter 20.
I will recommend this book for anyone looking for a good history story?
The writing quality is above average for the platform with many in-depth descriptions and an expansive vocabulary to supplement this. The characters are believable with their own personalities (however this is mostly shown through their actions and inner thoughts which is my next point). Much of the book details actions and exposition. There is a sufficient amount of dialogue, however it's not overloaded with it as many readers may be used to. It's a good read so far, though I can't say any advice regarding cliches and whatnot because I'm not a cultivator novel enthusiast. Still, I'd urge you to give it a try. :)
is this story dropped because it hasn't been updated in 20 days
I am very satisfied reading, because the chapter content is long and enjoyable. Last time I watched the Greek gods, but this book is no less interesting.
Sorry to everyone who has read Northern snow 40 chapters first, it seems like it is a little different then his 40 chapters but it still follows the same storyline. But if you are new welcome! this is a novel I am translating since I find it great and want more people to see it and hopefully inspire some to write these kind of sci-fi stories because it's pretty hard to find stories similar to these, I'm not gonna give it 5 stars because I myself feel like the story does have some problems in the writing which really translate horribly over, and I also don't feel like using all my free time every day translating chapters so it is gonna be a little slow with the releases. also the max chapters I can release for this story is 1.8k since I will need to pay more for the rest of the story on faloo and I'm a broke college student
I love this! You have created such a great world and characters. I love that your curse is not simple and how haunting the visual is. Keep up the great writing!
Knew from the start I am following and wld keep following cos like I said ure a star in eyes well done wish u could be alot fast but I understand,with ur exams on the way and all other stuff
The synopsis is cery unconventional. It would be a breath of fresh air when compared to the other novels with Trash MC->Getting OP Cheat->Being a creepy pervert->Massacring the entire family of someone who offended him.
I’m very tired of those kinds of novels, please bring more creative ones like this one.
I’ll be waiting