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This story is just in its initial phases, but the foreshadowing of an intense battle for the MC and his FL (Maybe FL? xD!) had been set in stone. I find the concept quite interesting. Although I'm not a big fan of Sci-Fi stories, I do read them occasionally (albeit rarely). The merging of technology and cultivation are the highlight of this story and I am looking forward to how it will unfold.
More power to the author and I am looking forward to Theodore and Turia's adventure in the world that you made.
its really good definitely gonna keep reading hopefully you don't drop it and finish it and start releasing 1 or 2 chapters a day ???????
Good world building and story development, mc is not a Simp and he possess a functional brain luckily to us readers.Mc personality is ruthless, efficient and cold so you don't need to hold your head in frustration because he gives treasures to enemies, random girls or doing stupid things like normal protagonists. Read it, you don't going to waste time.
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This is a potential hidden gem as long as it is not dropped. Doesn't look like a power fantasy of a psychopath like a lot of other novels or boring. Grammer is good characters are well written and story flow is also good.
Sad to see it go this way but was overall a very enjoyable read. This was one of those books that I couldn’t wait to update daily, even though the plot was common.
Story is actually written very well as in grammar, flow and characters, plot when considered individually. But big problem is how mc and plot connects, or should I say doesn't connect. Mc just doesn't have much agency and there's not much internal motivations in story form mc to do what he does. It seems like author develops some interesting plot, and then mc is made to flow trough that plot like puppet, mc just doesn't seem to have agency.
There's also the problem of mc being constantly bailed out by his ring when stuff gets even slightly hard, it's always some magical thing that bails him out, not his own intellect, skill or perseverance. This again reduces mc's agency, it's just very lame. It would not matter if it was just sometimes, but both of this things happen constantly.
Good example is whole thing happening in mc's village, he was already ready to go, he didn't have any reason to stay, no friends or family, no lure of great rewards, and again he was planning to leave. But then author made the plot happen, which I do agree is great when considered in isolation, but mc just started to participate in solving this mystery and helping around and we have absolutely no idea why, and there's no internal reason in story that tells us why. He just does like some zombie because the plot is there so obviously he should somehow participate in it.
He even wanted to see Lord of Hei dudes, but again, there was just no reason for that, he just wanted to because story required him to. There was no mention of potential rewards or anything that would help mc, if anything seeing mysterious strong person is just an huge threat.
I would really like to give this better review, but I just can't because story till 150 has been mostly just about boat(mc) being pushed around by waves, and every time boat is about to crash into huge rock, another wave just comes in and pushes the boat to the side. I would like that boat to have some oars, sails and actual person directing it.
This is a novel translated by MTL novel , it has up to 858 chps, but it's in hiatus there also . Of course it's not as good as translated by humans as it is by machine, although compared to other machine translation it is much better, there are some passages that are hard to understand as all machine translations mtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtl
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More sect building please! There aren’t Enough sect building novels and they’re Awesome plus this one is pretty cute so far>………………………….l.;..;;.
5 stars for having a hot yandere cultivation sect master mom, as well as being in a world where only women can cultivate. Thats practicaly guaranteed no Annoying young masters