Yoooo the cover finna get me act up
Like I've said before it's not my work (which technically means it's stolen). Just something I found online and decided to repost for people like me who prefers using offline reading apps
Me gusta pero estas mucho tiempo en la realidad en ves de en el juego llevas muchos capítulos y aún no se casi nada del juego ni lo he ara el personaje en el.
Hey. Looks like someone stole and published your story on Amazon. https://***.amazon.com/Survivors-Path-Braxus-ebook/dp/B08L2F3XZ5/
As the author and original rights holder, you can get the novel taken down if you submit a copyright violation claim at the bottom of the novel page.
Best of luck,
ramon
Though i write this novel when there is only three chapter and there is a long way to go. i must says that i found the concept of the story to be interesting and the use of language here is immersive and pretty.
But i do find some problem in certain scene where there are multiple unnamed Character in the scene and it is hard to keep track of who is doing what. aside from that everything is great.
I'm going to put this in my library and I'm looking forward to see new chapter as I'm now curious about what's going to happen next.
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can earn from your current story or new ideas, you might want to contact
[email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact
[email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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Nice book and interesting characters overall. The story is a bit slow to pick up at the beginning, but it does become much better and the characters become more interesting.
The two different world views of the two brothers should really make any of their meetings interesting....that is if they ever meet
The story is solidly written. With a sharp/calm MC but can still be influence by his hot bloodedness sometimes. good side characters. World background is generally established. In the 40 chapters that I read, most chapters revolve on spies and stuffs, which in my opinion is well written and has properly established who are possible plots and future hindrances for the MC in his journey. Power system is complicated hopefully future chapters will clarify some possible loopholes that might arise if such complex system is not regulated.Thankfully this novel is added as eastern fantasy and not sci-fi. Most sci-fi books here just uses sciency terms just to sound sci fi but actually just another eastern fantasy genre. At least this book is honest.
Wow, I don’t think I’ve ever read a novel that has such little idea about what it wants to do and be, and what the basic laws of how the world should function are, just for example it almost immediatly says if you die in the game you cant revive thats your one chance but like 2 chapters later you can revive just you have to restart, If your trashy like me youll probably still somewhat enjoy it but man are the inconsistencies annoying.