Chibi9139
Author here! Please check this work out and give it some love! I personally think it will be my best work to date! If you like overpowered mcs and academic settings, well you just might like it! So give it a read and please support me in the carnival!!
Very good. An interesting and unique take on the reverse isekai sort of novel. Unlike others I've read the MC doesn't return jaded and vengeful following some betrayal or tragedy. MC also doesn't bother hiding his transformation, while he doesn't quite flaunt it he isn't afraid of others knowing of his abilities either.
I loved the concept of two totally opposite elements to work with each other. I was just thinking about HOLY NECROMANCY and voilà a novel about it was in my recommendation. I am very much satisfied with this recommendation. it's little sad that the love intrest of mc is going to die in future (after 3 years).
Revenge + weak to strong = Great story(in my opinion)
hence ❤️ Arifureta , Shield hero (S1) & now Holy Necromancer
The story is extremely basic and a pure rip off of “Shadow Hack”. Writing quality is far below average and the characters are as basic as it gets. Tbh a wooden plank would’ve made a better MC. World background is never expanded on greatly. The grammar is so bad I genuinely thought I was having a stroke while reading. Getting shot in the head might’ve been a better experience than reading this trash. If I could give negative stars I would.
It’s a solid -3/5 stars, if you have nothing to do on a Saturday evening I still suggest not reading this absolute waste of time
Man. I did try to read this, but this story and its MC are so dumb that i couldn't even pass the 3º chapter.
To me, the worst part is the suicide tendencies of the MC. How he was so happy to exchange 20 years of his life with the ability to do some fancy punches. We all know that later there will be all kind of plot armor that will let him recover his lost life and even live uncountable years, but even so...
In conclusion: This is a dumb story made by a dumb author for dumb readers. I wish them an happy and long relation.
All in all, a solid novel.
There aren’t too many chapters so I can make a concrete review. However, from what I’ve read so far (30 chaps or so) I would say that it’s quite solid.
The concept is fun, the dialogues are nice, and the world background is also slowly starting to take shape.
That said, there are a couple of things that could improved.
Firstly, not sure if it was just me, but at some point you used an emoji, and my laptop couldn’t read it, so I was confused for a bit.
Could be just me, and it wasn’t really a big problem.
The pacing is fine since the world is starting to take shape, so no problem there.
Character is fine, but you what should be worked on more are side characters.
They do feel alive, but it can be slightly improved. Just give them more unique quirks, and some motivation and goals to which they aspire to achieve.
Anyhow, I really do like the story. Keep up the good work.
(Original Review: Alekzi)
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Hey there, you want to get this ring identificated ? YOU NEED 10k of gold..Oh you don't have it? Never mind, I will lend it to you for no f****ng reason. ... Oh you walk out to the quest that I just give it to you and find moreeee op items? It has to be a reasonable explication...Oh it just was on the floor. Nice.
If you like a bland MC, OP items and skills Per chapter this is the novel for you !
Idk why people put 3 stars on this boring novel.
This is a good book. It's excellently done. The writing quality is superb. As a fan of litrpg, one couldn't but root for the young Mia. Her character really fitted her role and the world building around her is on point. Great job.
The story isn't concluded, please finish it for us.
A very interesting and fresh take on the Harry Potter lore. I can't wait to see more of how Philip differentiates and develops as a character in relation to Harry. Great job and I sincerely hope you continue the story author. :)
Come on buddy you need to catch up. You took a long break cause of your laptop issues but you must have atleast drafted many chapters. Please please release them all. Let us fans have a nice chap marathon.
Thanks for the novel.
