Chibi9139
Garbage novel with no pacing. It could be a decent concept if the author took some time, did a lot of world building, fleshed out things but nope another POS novel where there's no world building, paper thin characters, and a novels worth of plot progression in 1-2 chapters. avoid.
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the story is amazing pls dont stop thi novel midway I want to read this story till endhdhrhuuifjfjjjjfufjdjrjhhhhhheheyyhdhdhdhdhehdhdhudhdhe
Why did it stop at chapter 60??? Why did it stop at chapter 60??? Why did it stop at chapter 60??? Why did it stop at chapter 60??? Why did it stop at chapter 60??? Why did it stop at chapter 60???
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i rarely give commets, but this novel is the trash of fkin trash. Idiotic MC, Selfish, and stupid very fast paced forward storyline. Even the author is lazy to make things better, dont fkin waste your time here.
Your synopsis sounds like a salesman going a roundabout way to not say what their product does and to just tty to get you to buy it and find out for yourself while they are trying to make it sound like the best thing ever.
A 100+ chapters and mc was still in 1st cultivation realm, most of the chapters was wasted because of unnecessary and repetitive information like how does body will achieve something like that, how can I control my internal breathing more freely yada yada, author focusing on word count literally destroyed this story haiist
Weirdly i absolutely love this novel to the deep of my heart..... And will probably always be my favorite novel. Idk if its because of how its written or because of the proggresion in the story. I fell in love with this slice-of life slow story like apart from a few people you can feel that most of them are real and fresh with different personalities
really nice novels, it started at a really nice pace, he has really good powers, which might not add anything to his arsenal for immediate combat, but well the current year is 2002 so no need for that too, but the potential his power has is tremendous, he also uses his brain very nicely, all in all, its a really good novel, and has really good potential.
Overall it's a pretty good one and i don't mind being slow paced,but the character is too weak and his growth is really slow to the point he can barely beat the weakest bunch,always needing protection from someone stronger,and characters who could end him easily just keeps on popping up in a place considered like a beginner zone.This is simply frustrating because you know the mc can't even protect himself not to mention his Selena because you know he doesn't have any trump card and is too weak to do anything to even the weaker canon fodders
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