I normally don't rate trial reads, but this one deserves it. I like how the MC has a cheat, but it's not over the top super-duper op. I also like how the. MC doesn't have 'heaven-defying talent' like most MCs in this troup.
Vary perfectly Novel
Shame that this wasn't picked. Used to be one of the top novels and original son-in-law stories in chinese platform. Story is way better than generic system, super overpowered & no brain MCs in today's trial reads, along with the terrible translation.
This story, has an Mc that actually uses his brain and outsmarts enemies stronger than him, rather than just using brute force.
Hello author! From what i read so far, I can say that this story is very intriguing. A lot of thought and dedication was put into this novel and i applaud you for such an effort. i look forward to reading more of your work. Good Job!!
Novel idea. Never thought i would say that before. MC is not a teenager who had his gf stolen by a rich young master, which is basically the main motivation in these stories. Basically, everything is just aged up. But it seems different than those othee urban face slappers, so ill give it a shot
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I like how they author explained the reasons for the protagonist overpowered abilities. Moreover, the fact that his sister held a far more overpowering trait than him made it good.
It looked like the protagonist need to work harder so that he to avoid being surpassed by his sister, while the sister aside also think of working hard to improve herself wanting to surpass her brother.
Another Author Review here. READERS...PLEASE DON'T DROP THIS BECAUSE OF THE EARLY CHAPTERS. IF IT FEELS RUSHED TO YOU, PLEASE KEEP ON READING... I AM EDITING MY CHAPTERS ONE BY ONE EACH DAY.. THAT IS ALSO THE REASON WHY MY UPDATES ARE SLOW.
THE FUTURE CHAPTER QUALITY HAS ALSO GREATLY INCREASED. SO PLEASE DON'T JUMP THE GUN RIGHT AWAY.
I hope you read it till the first volume before making assumptions. Thank you.
4 stars for me.
Just read 10 chapters, I wish to read a little bit more but I find a point in the novel where I'm sure many people would drop it.
Let's go to the facts;
- MC characters is... awful, it's clear that he was a childish and incapable person previously. He has no ambition whatsoever and is very impulsive in his behavior. He doesn't reflect upon his actions nor think about his future.
All in all, is quite distateful as a main character, for me he seemed like a random character in a book who died later on.
-World building: In this aspect I can say that is well written, although there's nothing crazy, it fits quite well and you don't have a hard time imagining it. Pretty solid.
-Interactions: This is a point where I think that while it's not bad, it can improve much more. It's okay but seemed somewhat lacking. There's also little monologues or other tools that could tell us what the MC and other characters think about their situations.
All in all, it could clearly improve.
-System?: Yes, there's a question mark there, because I keep wondering myself in these 10 chapters, is that really a system? It feels more like a shop.
Story wise, i see a clear problem with the novel, which is, the main character.
There's no signs or whatsoever that he could improve, there's no goals and anything like that in these chapters that could give you the hope to keep reading it.
There's also another point I wish to say this early, is quite simple to see how the author didn't wished to point out in the development of some business or something for the MC, I'm aware this isn't a kingdom building novel, whoever, knowing how his system function, is clearly somewhat a cheat if he could gain quite amount of money, which would ease out his problems.
But since this would eliminate the drama and plot for the author, since there would be little to no struggle for the MC, there's no words nor indication from the MC in that aspect.
Like a said, 4 stars novel, which is quite good in web novel standard.
Just hope for the Main character personality to improve since it makes harder for me to keep reading it.
Wish you good luck and success author.
I got to chapter 10 before i decided to drop this, when we start the story we get your basic intro to the mc (i transmigrated, here is my system which won't wake up for 6 more months, i specialize in history so i know what will happen, and somehow i went from a penny less bum to owning an inn on a corner street in the capital) this was all pretty much chapter 1 after that we meet Charles (the king in disguise) who asks about the situation of a war going on in another country and the kings chances of winning if he participated in the war, to this the mc described the snow storm going on in the enemies territory and a drought unknown to the king going on in our territory....... Now here is where my low score comes into play, the above took like two chapters, we then spend the next EIGHT talking about how amazing the mc is (and only find out in chapter 8 or 9 that the mc did NOT transmigrate but instead traveled too the past which is how he knew the weather, although why he would memorize the weather from most likely centurys past i have no idea) so in essence we have 8 chapters of identifying that the mc is amazing plus needing to cover up a plot hole of how the mc would know the weather in two separate parts of the continent
Its good.
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