BrandonDowntain
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So Interesting Where else can I read this novel. I'm out of coins ?
worst novel ever ............, ..............................................................................................m.mmmm..........
typical________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________meaning just like the hundreds of novels with the same theme, just normal, not unique at all.
It's a decent story. It's like fast food, if you go in and try not to think about it too much it's an enjoyable experience, but if you expect the next best thing to from here then you might be dissapponted.
this is an entertaining, enticing and book with a lot of potentials.i have read many magical realism novels, but this novel is more than what I have read in terms of quality.the character design and setting is incredible.keep the great work author,also I highly recommend this book to my fellow readers.i hope you drop another amazing novel however in the mid time reading over again won't be exhausting.
I enjoyed reading it, author. Hope you won't drop this story. It's well-written and engaging, so just wait for some time and I'm sure people will discover this gem. :-)Keep the good work btw!
A great start, love the novel so far just hope there will be stable releases in the future, keep up the good work! (also hope that there will still be chapters with him getting better physical stats later on)
:O this is a good example of how a good story is. Every single aspect of it is great and it makes the reader want to keep reading and hoping for more.
I've dropped this novel at the point when they are building the boat. I won't talk about the good parts of the story as they have been mentioned in many reviews, but only what i didn't like about it. First thing i didn't t like is the MC. His actions and they way he plays don't feel to me like an old mans at his 60s-70s, bases on how seriously he acts and plays the game. Secondly, the pacing of the story is bad. On the one hand, the story doesnt stay stagnant and things do happen, wether its crafting, fighting or interacting with people in the game(npcs or players). On the other hand, its ~200 chapters and the GAME is not even open for the public, and from some other review its not at ~400 chapters either. Lastly, i don't like the game you created. For me multiplayer games comes hand to hand with competition, whether thats pvp or getting a first clear on a dungeon. And your game destroys any chance of competition the further it goes. You have players with literally months of advantage before the game opens, 5 of them that are destined to be the best of the 5 elements of the game from the very start and then you get all 5 of them together to form a guild. How is anyone gonna compete with that? Moreover, the "slots" for the main questline are filled before even the game goes live.The first plotline has to do about the war of two sides if dragons through their champions and 2 of the "good" ones have already been picked by chapter 200. What made me drop the novel was that lack of fairness and chance for the general player to compete for any kind of lead in the game.
Hello Daoists, I am Fateless, a cultivator who has chosen the path of writing through The Heavenly Sword Emperor.I am not an English realm cultivator, so my early chapters were a little worse, but my English writing skills have improved since the day I started writing. If you don't believe me, you can compare my latest chapters with my past chapters, and even then, If you believe, My skills didn't improve even after a month, you can quit my novel, and I won't complain a bit. But before quitting, please provide me your valuable comment on which areas I should improve. That's my only request.But I also should think about it from the readers' point of view, so I decided to edit my early chapters for readers' convenience, but it would take some time as I decided to post two chapters daily.So for some time, you have to bear my ignorant mistakes. As far as I know, it won't be difficult for you as so many of you read novels on M.......L Sites(I can't say the name here).So I hope you would support me, Fateless.
Great story although I dont think a harem will work with this story if he was born an emperor posably but it's your call. ?
