hmmm I have read the synopsis and the reviews so im definitely gonna read this but I'll wait till a good chunk of chapters are piled up. i sincerely hope you will not drop the book midway. many great novels are dropped midway which is just pure torture
Making grammatical mistakes is fine since you're new and english isn't your main language. You're doing great for a first timer, so keep up the good work!(๑¯ω¯๑)
I am really interested in this story, the way the story is narrated is soo nice, i love it??, i hope you will win , waiting for more chapters??
Cerita ini sangat menarik, tetapi pengembangan konflik antara tokoh utama dan tokoh perempuan kurang menarik. Buatlah konflik yang sedikit lebih rumit untuk mendapatkan seorang perempuan untuk tokoh utama, agar cerita dapat berkembang lebih menarik. Thanks for the story. ???????????
I enjoyed reading this, I think that the concept for the novel was good. The r18 scenes I think were well made. Good job author.Filling in space for reviews is so annoying, don't mind this.
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This is beyond trash!!!I can't believe anyone who reads would actually see this piece of shoddily collected words as a suitable read!!!It is not only a waste of time and space it is disappointingly poor in every sense.No coordination in the writing.World building is non-existent.The characters have no builds.The descriptive prowess of the writer is nothing to write home about.This is a waste of time.Do not read this.
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The story is written well, the characters are unique and original and you can easily see the effort the author put into this novel. I highly recommend giving this novel a try!
Nice work