BrandonDowntain
this is the most well done and unique of the lot ???. The quality is mediocre at best, but compared to the other stuff I'm just giving it a 5. I think my dao heart is breaking hopefully I can pass this tribulation and find another treasure through these trials.
The premise of the story seems fine but the execution seems like ah "meh" type of story. I find it so wasteful to spend this type of system in that type of method. If you had the power to gain something every time you die why not just rush to a place like a "Forbidden Mountain" or something where mortality rate is so high that you die just by being there which every cultivation novel have in any Genre. You can just stay trapped there and die so many times that you become so OP and just stop dying when your strong enough to resist what is making people die there.
Do yourself a favour and don't read this. you'll get a headache , extreme cringe and lazy writing.Author is like a parrot or broken record repeating sentences nth number of times.
So I read about 45-46 chapter ....I don't know why people are giving 1 star...btw I'm not going to criticize as everyone has their own opinion...and I respect that...as for me it is a very good novel and hilarious...don't know what going to happen in future ...but for now it's 4.8 star...as I think character development is little bit lacking...
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this isn't the right novel to the title I came to take a look at this novel as it had looked interesting only to get a random novel. I've actually seen a novel which has the exact same start where mc becomes a dragon and all that as well as the whole hint system thing telling him which portal to go into at the start I can't remember the name of the other novel though
So many unexplained scene, so many annoying thing the mc done and his pathetic girl.. The author cant even utilize the technique the mc knowned and study. at least the update is 3 star, the rest is mehhhh..
I think this my second review after i finished reading in the raws.A good work, only 300+ chapters and very mild nationalism. there is no insulting of nations due to something that happened in history. But the story feels very rushed, the speed at which the story progress is very disappointing. One minute he is challenging high schoolers next second he is fighting an entire nation.
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WN deleted my review.First thing first this review is gonna be long, so be prepared. So the problems with this novel are so numerous that I am amazed that the author was not able to find these out or maybe the author is just that lazy. Lets start.I have read this novel upto 6400 chaps, so believe me when I say this that there is no end in sight for this novel. I mean even after 6500+ chaps we have not yet reached the main plot of the novel. Amazing right??? I don't have a problem with lengthy novels, actually I quite like them but they should be done skillfully. Reading this novel you can be sure that author is simply writing for the heck of it, not for story progression uh-huh. LikeThe major plot of the story is that the family of Protag is actually a great family and is in fight with an organization. This organization is now also in mortal world and there is constant friction between Protag and This organization. Now after 6500 chaps we still don't know where the family of Protag or why are they even fighting. So it will be a loooooong looooong time before we can see any advance in that direction.Then there is the whole issue with character of Protag. I mean he is introduced as killer "retired
One of the best story i ever read, but its a shame that you stopped but anyways, nice job .
I like this novel a lot. My only grief with it is that the updates aren't released at ludicrous speed. Am I at 140 yet... how about now? Just a little bit more I think
