This story is both beautiful yet saddening. Despite it not being a story about an apocalypse or about the end of the world, it captures what I have barely seen any other novel does—the feeling of helplessness that comes from being out of options. But enough with the grim and gloom onto the review!-Writing Quality- First off, I just want to say that the writing is near perfect. Unless I read out loud and search for flaws, you'll probably skip over any flaws in the story. The words used in the story are perfectly rounded to the point. It's not repetitive, but its also not trying too hard. If there was one issue not including grammatical errors that are almost impossible to avoid, it would be a little bit more description of the environment they live in and not just the direct area the MC is at.-Stability of Updates- Only being in the third chapter, I can't say anything. However, looking at the current chapters, it seems the author has a nice rhythm to the updating speed.-Story Development- The first chapter truly encompasses what one would think life would be when poor and in this type of situation. While diving slightly into philosophy, the Novel honestly portrays the case our Main Character is in to the point you can't help but root for him. -Character Design- So current, I'm in love with the Main Character and his personality. He's not edgy, nor is he stupid. He has the innocence genuinely equal to that of someone born in a bad situation. The idea that thinks things will be beautiful after getting a job may seem stupid to us who live in somewhat ok conditions indeed shows the author knew what he was doing.That being said, I don't really feel for any other characters in the Novel, including the siblings or the parents though that is definitely due to the lack of interactions with them and not due to the author.-World Background- I like the idea that the world is the same but also different. I love that the author is using slight changes to make the world his own in the Novel and is genuinely expanding the horizons of the world with each chapter. However, I do feel there is a lack of detail on the overall area in this world, which would help with the reader's imagination.
