Rebirth: The Villainous Young Master in a Novel

The only drawbacks of this novel are the release of chapters. I would also like to tell the author about the plot hole before the plot goes too far: the author said that about a hundred Warriors and most of the city's population survived. I can understand that some of the soldiers were wounded and only 57 went into battle, but after the war, neither other fighters nor citizens were mentioned in the plot....

Give away your beautiful bride and gain a world level beauty, Give away your mother and you will gain a father,give away your job and you will get retirement. Give away your pipi and your mother will never again call you son.

This is my second review after reading through all the available chapters (38).First of all, this novel is amazing. I rarely give 5 stars but this novel deserved it. I won't dive into the plot much but what started off with a simple game of soccer went as far as an alien invasion. The pacing was good for the most part and the grammar was good, not perfect but good enough. I can hardly wait for more. Really hope the author would continue to pump out more chapters regularly. Thank you author for creating this wonderful novel and thank you, the reader, who's checking this out for reading this review XD. Gooday!

I can hardly find any reincarnate stories as good as this. I could hardly make any errors. That alone was impressive but to be genuine the first chapter has to be..., u know what I mean to enable the readers to read more. I'm not criticizing but am just being genuine but apart from that everything seems to go nice and the pargraphs are put in order. I just love the top-notch vibe it's giving.

I'm sure in whatever the native language of the author this makes more sense. However, this is barely readable in English. Sentences are capitalized every other word. You will see sentences that say, " Wow How you Know You amazing!" and that's the least of the grammatical sins. I'm sure there is a plot buried  under there somewhere, but it's too painful to find.

The fall was short, but it made Ren close her eyes shut and her heart beating wildly. When her small body made impact with the ground and making a loud thud, she did not register the physical pain. Instead, all that she could hear and feel was the rapid beating of her heart against her chest.