So this is my first novel and I want to be shameless but I will be serious with it and I hope you give it a chance ???????????????????
A bad written rip off to "Library of heavens path". Also, a lot of things don't make sense, in a trashGpt kind of way. ..
New novel from the author who wrote 'Peerless Martial God' and 'Ancient Godly Monarch'. Stats:-Website: Qidian.comTotal clicks: 3.3 millionTotal words: 0.76 million(About 250 chapters)Total Recommendations: 3.5 millionTotal Score: 9.4/10 from 974 usersThe stats are great, even I want to check out this novel but this author writes a lot of fluff to increase word count, so I'm not going to get my hopes up too high, hence I'm expecting this to be a three star novel but I hope that this novel surprises me pleasantly.
After reading this novel I can say this is refreshing. Although there are little ups and down but its worth a shot. Author san is dedicated to his work and updates are stable. I can't ask for more. Cheers to Author. Hope will get mass release once a month ?
Although the growth of his harem is still a bit too fast. At least, the women have their own back stories. Overall, this rewrite is much better than the original version.
REVIEWNarration: Decent and immersiveWorldbuilding: Vast and detailedCharacter development: Nice and steadyCharacter design: OutstandingDialogues: Realistic and LifelikePacing: Not fast nor too slowWriting quality: MagnificentExecution of the Genre: Good pitchStory potential: HighUpdating Stability: SteadyMESSAGEI am deeply happy that the author created this novel. Great world-building and narration surpassing mine. Splendid writing quality and fluency of narration.ADVICENone, the author was a better author and his work was something I have to learn to. Kudos!
yes i leave a review on my work work?? thank you for choosing my book, i hope you enjoy it (eventhough it's not that good) leave a comment and tell me how it is for you ???
Seeing many people made bad reviews with avarage 3☆s or so, I decided to join in.The story, ch 19, is quite good as far as I read. It involved an MC with ability that can allow her to play a role in a story. The story is a work of an actual author there in her reality. So, the act she does there will affect the storyline of the actual novel/manga in real life. I consider it good because:1. The ln not really rushing, she is not really op.2. She is a girl that think that she is just a ur-avarage-jane-doe and it's the way she was. (It just recently that she has some people recognise her)3. She is a traveler. You understand, that kind of novel that travel to new body, new life etc etc), but that didn't made her to know everything and can do every sort of amazing things like how usually other mc does. 4. Her real life is describing about novel author, how webnovel author got his payment, all sort of things author may be thought while writing his/her novel and manga. It just made readers know about author's line of thinking. Lastly, I'm not really know how this novel will progress in the future as right now there is only some 19 or so chapters, but that is all I can review so far. Thanks for you whoever read this. If you see some newly released novel(or maybe even the old one), please read some 5-10 ch to judge whether the ln is good or no before you all give a review.I just recently know that author just paid 5 cent for 1000 words/one reader. The pay is actually not that high-(exception if the ln is well known or it's popularity is high)Even if Qi really applied payment system for this app, I think that most of the money should go to the author pocket and not the corporation!! Give right to author!!! Yeayeayea!!P. SDo forgive me if my grammar is hard to understand as there's may be many wrong spelled and mistyping words or wrong grammar! I am satisfied as long as you understand what am I saying!!-Best regards, a sincere reader.
I stoped at ch.9, I just couldn’t stand the banter between the system and him and the way the character keeps repeating how awesome he is. Good luck on the book Arthur, just not my cup of tea.
First off, Amazing Cover Art and Title. it really caught my attention.It's a really interesting system too.It progresses amazing and I'm a fan of it.This is an amazing read. A Fun and Interesting one that too!.Hoping for more chap!!!
This is a great story! The MC makes intelligent choices and the other characters are fleshed out as well. I love the power system and how it works in different professions and not just combat. All in all great novel and I hope this continues!!
I have been a fan of the book for over a year now , and this is what I would like to say for the book 5 stars definitely , there are no major grammar mistakes or plotholes and the world building and story development are excellent.The author's way of description is second to none , you can visualise the terrain , the fight sequences and the characters easily as it feels 3D. As an author myself , i can say that this is one of my top 3 stories that i learnt from the most and is one of my all time favourites .It's been relevant on the platform for years now and even after 900+ chapters the story is gripping and there is no repetition. So in the end all i want to say is thankyou Avans for all the hard work.