good concept, good idea, it's just that the author doesn't have much experience in writing quite obviously, but no matter I will keep suporting author, so I hope he improves
Very good story can not wait to read more, so keep it coming. Ya this a good stiry and i have to take up space so that i can post this and im surebthis has yet to reach the right amount of words to be post.
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it's been a while since I've rate a novel but this one is special1st Mc is a real genius doesn't act without benefits of proper incentives, can be decisive and ruthless when needed2nd Mc is not a simp he's task oriented.3rd cultivation stages are more less the same as other eastern Fantasy novels meh!!!!4th world background is kinder vogue we only know a single empire not the continent or other continents rival empires or the status of the cultivation world is is high or low cultivation world.5th no cheats or bloody system Mc himself is a cheat his memories and deduction abilities of his mathematical past self is great, his talent is great mixed with his mind.6th overall a great book strongly ? recommend it. just that updates tend to be on the slow side.
Definitely read this book if you were a fan of King of Gods, or if you like cultivation novels where the MC is trash and weak but after getting a mysterious power, he becomes stronger and reaches the peak. The title is kinda dumb though, it spoils the mysteriousness of the Crystal heart. Just by looking at the title you can know what the crystal heart is. It’s really good but premium on chapter 40? Kinda spoils it, I haven’t seen enough of the book to be hooked yet. Still really nice however. Please don’t drop yet. I won’t spoil it, it’s really interesting but I don’t know where the plot is leading to right now. Just read it yourself. ??
Now, this doesn t deserve the 5 stars, i enjoyed it, but it s not even 3 starsWriting qualityIt s well, quite bad, in a chapter the translator user "young daoist priest" like 10 times in a chapter, and a lot of words are just used again and again instead of changing them and making the story feel more smoothly and have a diversity.. a lot of stuff seem out of place too, i think the translator is quite lazy, but i still gave it 3 stars as it s readable and not many grammar mistakes. Story developmentNow i gave it 3 stars, it s moving quite well, not that fast and not slow either, as far as i read he already got the first expansion, and did some stuff there and there, although everyone seems to either attack him or not attack him, it s lacking regarding that and especially characters. Character designNow, i only gave it 1 star because, all of them beside like 3 people are 1 dimensional, and those who aren t, their way of talking feels forced, they say stuff they shouldn t do, they do stuff they shouldn t do, it s just out of place.. And we don t even know the blood demon's name at the chapter i left (like 39). Update stabilityWell, i started reading this yst, and from then till now there s no new update, it s been almost 2 days already, but i still gave it 3 stars. World backgroundI don t rlly know what to say here, not too much not too less, we know where this happens, what s around it, i still don t know or i didn t understand about the sects around, where they are located and stuff like that, neither we know the planet we re located, overall it s quite average so i gave it 3 starsOverall 2.6
Good Novel to read but a bit short right now. Hope the release will be a bit more maybe. Overall only a 4 Star right now because it is a bit too early to be rated
Copy Pasta of Animal Assassin Group. Like legit change 'control animals' into 'turn into animals' and its the exact fkn same. Yes only 5 chaps atm but the similarity is ridiculous. Webnovel do you even take a look at the shit you put out here?
It's a great story, uses a simple way to explain the protagonist's martial knowledge but very effective, the game's combat system has a lot of freedom. Players can even do the impossible saying, if I had to help how about making sure that players can mix classes if they meet certain conditions? ready that's it thanks for the story
Great book, one my favorites. sucks was dropped anyone know how we can this book Going again? Is there a voting where you can vote For this book to be continued?
I don't know why ppl give say this novel very good. In my opinion it just so so, and some parts of it annoying. This novel contains only to describe how incredible the MC (chosen among chosen, crown prince etc, ppl bow to him), MC can't die (he died, but easily revived, body already destroyed until left only eyes but still not die, and when he face certain death, there's always someone there to help him!). Author create too many characters (alot of them didn't even named and even forgotten!), emotion relationship sux (i only like the story at 2nd plane at immortal demon sect which involved ke yunhai, and i really pity toward chu yuyan especially), too many magical items that also forgotten. And how MC bully ppl who weaker than him (i really hate this 1), author makes the joke which is not funny. World back ground is good.
What can I say................Lin Fan the MOTHERF*CKING HUMAN KING IS BACK WITH A TWIST???....................................................