The MC is lazy as heck, he reminds me of myself. The story is also mildly amusing. If you are a masochist, would definitely recommend.No major problems with grammar and such, its smooth reading.
proper review :3 for updating stability and 3 for writing of course story starts with hruday main character who has asthma and dislexia which he later discovered he goes to his school reopening only to find out that his life was going to change drastically from that single decision he is just above average smart introverted guy filled dark thoughts and tierd of loop (ahh why does it feel like I am describing myself except the above average part) this story contains base building element which people don't put lot of emphasis on just watch how a teen tries to manage a entire base filled with adults and it has lot of gore later on and shows mentel and emotional conditions of survivors later on as years pass don't worry it won't be boring long let me give you a spoiler no a hint : real crow, super special I Really don't know how to review without getting excited and spoil so that's it give me some review guys and show some mercy
This is really mind blowing and interesting. Nice art work ?, top notch...Also I like the way the characters connect and align with each other, makes it inspirational and gives you a wider imagination.
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Ty for giving my novel a try. I will try to keep this short.After reading many novels, I have decided to write my own, so some things may feel nostalgic. However, despite my inexperience and the similarities this novel may have with others, I will try to keep things fresh and original.The protagonist is at the apex when it comes to Alchemy, also known as Pill Concocting. But even with his experience, he is not perfect and failed to create his perfect pill, which has cost him his life.The next time he awakes, he finds himself in the body of a silkpants in some backwater place in the Lower Realm.And this is where the story begins.
I love everything about this story and thank you Praise Kalu for giving me the right source to offset my stress for each day. I'm looking forward to the upload of many more chapters as we would follow along, respectable fan
It's early in the story to write reviews, but it's also happening quickly.The story seems interesting, maybe like a cliche start but I have a feeling that you are a beginner at writing.The fights were nice, simple, not too long and you didn't include unnecessary long dialogs.You should definitely improve character design, what are Leyce, Kagusuchi Akane and that guy from academy like, what do they look like etc (same goes to the world where he is, but also his old world).Besides that, everything seems fine so far, I really hope that the story will have some interesting plots to it.
its actually funny that someone named Brandon is the villain cuz that's me. .. .well see you asked me to read it and i did and so i am leaving an honest review for you. .. i won't say it's good or bad but it has potential that's for sure
This is not a bad story but it is very childish. Even though author state that this story is for children but I think it is too childish. Even children book like Harry Potter write in a way that can be read by both children and *****. I just think that you have a very good plot to be develop but you waste it.
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Loved the story, the first part is really interesting and made me feel giddy and excited. I see so much potential in the novel and as well as the author. I found some sentences that me laugh and made me feel excited. And I really love the Isekai genre! Made me totally hook. The writing quality is excellent and the plot is superb! I'll add this on my library so that I can finish it and savor this masterpiece! Kudos and Keep writing!