Alright now let me start with this. I really like this novel. It has flaws, don't get me wrong, but I can look past them. Let me just get the flaws out of the way. The writing quality can be poor at times, though it usually maintains a consistent mediocrity. If I remember correctly the author is not a native english speaker, however tries his best with the aid of Grammarly. This means it's readable, but mistakes will be noticeable.
The second flaw is the romance. This is a harem. Neglect play seems to be a fetish of the mc's and boy does he not care if everyone knows it. Jokes aside, the mc does acquire a lot of women, and from what I have read in the synopsis there are even more to be acquired. He obviously doesn't have the time to deal with them all, and will likely consistently ignore a group of them who simply aren't near him. He also isn't super clear about his intentions to love multiple people with anyone but this one heroine who also double's as current best girl.
Final flaw is a matter of personal preference, and not something that is necessarily a problem. In fact it hasn't even happened yet. Dimension jumping. For the love of gosh, please dont send him to different universes, he has enough stuff to worry about already. Its fine as is please don't.
Anyways, two flaws and personal plea aside, the rest of the story is good. The action is fast and doesn't drag on. The main character is smart while not making inexplicable decisions, the heroines are (mostly) memorable and have their own personalities and thoughts. The system, while sentient, doesn't abuse it's sentience to make the mc do as it wishes. There's also a bit of cringe, but not enough to cause second hand embarrassment. The comedy is also pretty good. It also doesn't hide the seggs from you for 100+ chaps.
All in all, besides the romance and writing, everything else is solid.
3/5
Keep it up lad!
Excelente abordagem do tema da luta do bem contra o mal, o autor brinca bastante com temas teológicos e o poder divino baeado em milagres, entrando em choque com o senso comum de um mundo de fantasia baseado em mana, que é só mais uma equação
I just want to give a rating and support the author. I hope more readers will notice it soon....................................................
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
I like the whole farming system troupe but executed way too poorly sadly. The characters and story lack depth and ultimately it feels too unrealistic.
I just want to tell the author that PLEASE SPACE THE BIG PARAGRAPHS THEY ARE HEADACHE INDUCING AND ARE HARD TO READ.
Also, I just saw the first couple of chapters
Omg, would you guys fucking stop already. You people, didn't even read the novel. The review section doesn't talk about the fact if the novel is good or not. No simply ****ting B.S. everywhere. Atleast, give this one a goddamn try.
Fuck this B.S.
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I've always been a sucker for the good vs evil stories, and this one certainly didn't disappoint. Writing quality is pretty good, and I totally recommend this
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