Very interesting premise. I'm looking forward to reading more chapters and seeing how far this novel will go. There are very few grammar mistakes with awkward phrasing here and there but that doesn't affect the story too drastically. Paragraphs are easy on the eyes which make this a very fun and relaxing read. Keep up the good work!
I went on reading marathon and read 13 chapters on get go , It is good and gritty story of Damian. I enjoyed it, will continue the reading . Give it a try if you like action packed fantasy world
Another decent story ruined by a braindead MC. He eats a plant which only has a 5% chance of not killing or crippling the consumer, and he survives. Yay! He's not doomed anymore! He can slowly work on his cultivation, enter a good University, and- oh. He just ate two more of that plant.
Here's my one true complaint about this work: the story doesn't seem to have anything in common with the title. They are nearly completely unrelated. Title says he has a cultivation world. With this type of novel, that would mean he owned a world, possibly a small or inner world. He would also likely be the only "human" or sentient being with access to it. Basically, it would be completely his domain. This one in the story? It's anything except that. Up to the point I stopped reading, it seemed more like a planet located in a distant part of the same universe, and practically crawling with a Cultivator..."infestation" (heh! just kidding.) Anyway, he merely teleportation there. He doesn't own it, from what I could see.
4 years ago, last update author you still alive~? if you have new account please let me know thanks!
I loved reading Taffygirls awesome novel, this is just blatant stealing.
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Probably not going to read since there’s no harem, but I do appreciate you telling the readers that it’s not harem unlike other authors who say “Read to find out
This is the first novel I have decided to review, and I wish that I could rate it 5 stars. It is a great read and I have enjoyed it. Unfortunately, chapter 108 is the last chapter that is placed in order. What is supposed to be chapter 109 is only on Patreon. You won't find that out until after you have paid the money to reach chapter 109, when there is a very noticable chapter skip. If this issue gets resolved, I hope I am allowed to change this review to 5 stars. If not for this single major issue, the story would deserve 5 stars. Any other issues I have had are insignificant compared to the quality of this book. I hope this issue gets resolved so I can continue reading this story. More information can be found in my comment on chapter 108 for those who have already paid to get that far.
Wow this is boring, read the first chapter and lost all interest
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Very interesting story, keep it up. Im catching up
Wish I can support this book with more than my review. However recommending will also have an importance. From what I've read so far. it was satisfying and the description was tangible enough to improve my imagination. Nice read overall!
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