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I will only compare this book to that 'Digging to survive' novel.(read 25 chapters)
Simple answer: THIS IS BETTER.
Long answer: Story has more world building, power system, with more side characters/potential antagonists. Better translation quality. First two chapters talks about the background of the characters and their relationships with each other(mostly business relations). In summary, the two novels have the same setting, same cheat(somewhat), and same plot decisions(trading and digging parts) but this is better executed and not monotonous as the other one. It even has better writing quality when describing battles.
Another trash talk cultivation novel but what can I say ! I'm addicted to them
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I have finish this, and it's kind of interesting for me... Its about a world where isekai or other novel (xianxia type) merge inside one world and lots of arrogant sh1t you all recognized... This is so so in standard, but my standard kinda low.. So yeah, it's good..
I couldn't deal with the edgy dialogue. Important factors of the story were forced, like extremely forced. Some grammar issues but not the worse. My deciding factor to drop the book was the was the edgy and cringe dialogue. I wasn't didn't see it being developed into something more interesting.
BUT if you don't mind the dialogue and some forced development, then you'll be fine.
Wish you well author, and hope you improve.
I was drawn with the sudden twist, it made the story very intriguing. You would want to know what happens next, how did he end up being a baby? And all sorts of questions which I think make this one of those page turner novels ♥️ Highly recommended. Great job author-nim ☺️
Aight, I've read till the latest chap so here we go
1:Tips for new readers, turn off your common sense and serious mode, this is one wild and crazy ride, do not expect common sense as the Mc and his abilities are beyond that.
2:This work is and I quote, 'a shitpost' and 'the junk food of webnovel'. But it's the good kinda shit and delicious type of junk food. It's meant as one of those works you go to when you had a bad day and badly need a laugh, just like a meme.
3:The English and grammar is good, no problem whatsoever reading it, the pov change is stated as well so you won't break your head analyzing who's who.
4:The Mc does a lot of misunderstanding, and by that a lot, I mean A LOT, that's one of the good parts of this work though, so try not to think to much about it. Like I said, turn off those common sense.
5:The Mc doesn't act the stereotypical Mc type.....so don't expect him killing left and right just cause someone look down on him...no, I'm pretty sure they'll die or get beaten up due to his work, one way or another.
6:The update is stable, it's daily if I'm not mistaken.
7: Also, one of the chaps made me cry....granted, I cry quite easily but still...just shows you that deep down this crazy Mc, is a normal human being...not so normal but this kinda speaks volumes, It kinda feels like deep down a brainless zombie...is a beating heart♥...also pun intended and yeah sounds kinda cringy.
Anyways, good work author! Keep up the good work. I'm a fan now....also, lemme be shameless for a bit and promote my work here
This story had a great start. The system was a little off, but could be corrected and improved over time. It did not get improved and only went downhill from there. The system seems to forget simple things. For example, it missed when the MC killed a three legged chicken and it did not update the Exp on it. It just randomly says, “you killed enough things to here’s a level or two”.
The character has many loopholes and for a character that is supposed to get smarter every level, he seems to forget simple things. One time he decides to kill two mages because, “although they are non hostile they provide a passive threat to me that could go off anytime”. The problem is that the MC forgot he has this power that can make people forget things and make them have illusions. He could have just made them forget any trace of him then put them under an illusion so they can’t see him or his traces.
Also the grammar is quite bad.
I must say though that this story had great potential. The way the character thought was in a unique way, a way I really liked (at first). The power he had was also unique.
A great book that had huge potential, that gave me more thoughts and an unique way of thinking. Poor execution though in my opinion.
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