they still get together?
Story started great, but after first arcs author reduced writing to just ChatGPT writing. Text are lacking character development, story flow is inconsistent, dialogs are lacking, a lot of important developments are left to implications. Even character names are often confused or written incorrectly.
Instead we have very verbose and elaborate AI writing to just meet word count quota. With minimum human editing.
A lot of wasted potential.
Started this book just to test it out, planning to stick with it! Definitely recommend it to readers looking for more from their WN experience. The text is beautiful descriptive, painting a vivid image of scenes, action and characters alike. The author really finds his stride and strikes a nice balance between his descriptions and dialogue. For me, it’s clear and natural to read. Easy flow.
Have to commend the dialogue! It’s a pet peeve of mine when dialogue serves as meaningless fluff, but here it’s full of interest and progresses the narrative. I love teasing, witty banter, sinister threats, bravado… I don’t think I’ll be disappointed. (…Glares at author and expects him to deliver!…)
Well thought out world taking shape. Characters feel distinctive with a lot of potential—varied abilities, personalities, motivations, etc. I mayyy already be picking my favorites.
For anyone who is from the south or has experienced southern culture, you will relate to the mc. He is a principled, family driven, and responsible black man. That is the best way to describe him without spoiling. His powers only allowed him to better act upon those traits. The writing quality is great. The character interactions are always a great thing to read. They feel like family. I love this book and I suggest you give it a chance.
Warning: you will learn some southern slang reading this
where to start? xenophobic the author is on the extreme side of xenophobia againt other countries and cultures and against fantasy creatures and you can see that he gets a lot of xenophobic comments and he makes fun of the people saying it thinking he's not xenophobic.I've read so much and I wish I didn't the world of buildings such a good concept and that's all it will ever be the author butchered it he has no idea what makes a fantasy novel good he just spits on it constantly like all the fantasy has wronged him irl in horrible waysCHARACTER DEVELOPMENT. it's non existent. main character buildjng is only the first couple chapter then he's a cold xenophobic killing machine his main character is xenophobic how is there not more reviews of that? side characters. they have names besides that not much else most notable is long dragon his name has changed he had a good amount of character dev then it was dropped. his girl friends are many and no sustenance one was mentioned who author was playing as having a big role on mc and I can not rember anything about her at all nothing. the sister can be considered not to be in the story she plays no part except saying the wrath mc would have if anything happened to her.just don't read it it's not worth money and especially not your time I really wish it was better I had such high hopes and just constant let downs sorry for any grammar mistakes
Uniquely different and interesting to read. From the first chapter, I am captivated by the story and want to see it to the end.
Hi I'm the author!
As this is my first time making a story, I'm really excited as to how it'll turn out.
ignore the shamelessly 5 star review please don't mind me
just read any of the other comments on this novel the are probaly 99% accurate
This novel is quite good, but is dragged down by inconsistencies and an extremely unoriginal author. The premise is awesome. Three different villages, each one cultivating a different art: witchcraft( hexes and curses ), zombie controlling and poison( MCs village). And this is where the awesomness ends. Within 10 chapters, MC cultivates his village's special poison cultivation skill. And instead of poison skills, he gets physically strong. He hits hard. Such a fcking dissapointment. And once in a while, when its convenient for the plot, he has poison skills.
The novel is extremely generic. There is better around.
I see that the author is doing everything in order to increase the quality of the novel, the story is interesting even tho some parts are missing, the 5 stars are to encourage the novel and the author for the good work so far.
it's good and interesting to read. will be waiting for more update.unless it's discontinued?
Wow, must be the most corrupt novel out there. Not only can you not watch ads to get the next chapter, the price to unlock chapters are 8 stones AND they have like 50 chapters locked. Just look at power ranking number 1, library to heaven's path. 4 stones or watch an add, and just two chapters are "locked"/"bonus chapters".
All this for a half-arsed story with too much reliance on modern knowledge and a boring mc that doesn't even have any real powers... Yeah, nah.