reading this book am looking forward to seeing more interesting characters to the coming chapters
slow paced story be back around 399+ chapters! the story is to much detailed to be read with only 60+ chapters available.. I don't want to waste time reading this one until I'm sure that the author will not drop it mid-way! added to my library
????????????????? lol the last part was too funny...hmmm my interest is piqued, hopefully it's good.......................
trash,...............................................................................................................................................
The story, characters, and background are pretty okay. It’s just the translation that needs more work.jeuishhdhjdjiijdjdidjidjehuodihehhduid
ignore this , just want to support this good novel ¯_(ツ)_/¯¯_(ツ)_/¯¯_(ツ)_/¯¯_(ツ)_/¯¯_(ツ)_/¯¯_(ツ)_/¯¯_(ツ)_/¯¯_(ツ)_/¯¯_(ツ)_/¯¯_(ツ)_/¯¯_(ツ)_/¯¯_(ツ)_/¯¯_(ツ)_/¯¯_(ツ)_/¯¯_(ツ)_/¯¯_(ツ)_/¯
really good!!
It's really good. But unfortunately, it becomes unreadable around chapter 300.The character names and locations are all suddenly unrecognizable as they all get new names. Even the game itself can get 3 different names in the same chapter.First 300 chapters it was Battle Online.Now it's suddenly War Online, Conquest Online, Punitive Force Online. Might even have been other names for it, but I don't remember.In other words, it's all MTL with no manual input. You should not pay for such chapters.
Very good novel with great character and story development over the first 75% of the chapters. The ending is sadly rather abrupt and badly planned, and the quality of writing noticeably decreases towards the end.
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Lol they blocked my review regarding how crappy their updates. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HOPE EVERYONE WILL SEE THIS BEFORE THIS WILL BE BLOCKED AGAIN. LOLOLOLSuper sloe updates! Double chapsMissing chaps. Disarranged chapsInconsistent wordsWhat else can you say? A full packged of crappy uodates! Ruined the great story!!!!!
Get rid of all these fake 5 star reviews. This book makes no sense and has a guy be an idiot apparently, then suddenly in the second chapter he’s a genius of Sherlock levels, with nothing actualy changing to make that happen