A modern man in 1930’s Americas

fascinated to finally read it

At the time of the review there are 6 chapters. and I like tho story a lot and think it has a lot of potential. I am really interested in the brother sister dynamics and hope it will continue to be developed.

Get rid of all these fake 5 star reviews. This book makes no sense and has a guy be an idiot apparently, then suddenly in the second chapter he’s a genius of Sherlock levels, with nothing actualy changing to make that happen

The story is slow, but well developed with logical growth. Our MC awakens as a grasshopper but with very few memories. However, it the only downside that throws me off is the name of the MC as system. It's hard at times to delve into because of that fact.

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Writing quality is spot on except for the rare miss spelling. Paragrapgs should also be cut to read easier.Update stability is practically every week so its good.Storry development is good, but gives me the feel similar to Chinese novels, except it's the american version. With less racism. Hopefully.Charachter design is good. I wish he started of older but I'm cool with how he is now. Also wish he was abit more Op. Like Natalie Portman in the movie Lucy. But he would gain power at a slower rate.The being at the bigining should also make an appearance, soon but that's just my opinion.World background is pretty much earth with just afew more baddies and mysteries, so its ok.So over all its a good read that I recommend you try. Keep it up author.