800 Million years ago.
Zack circled another building about 4 ~ 5 kilometers away from where they are.
Song Qiyan was silent for a while. Xia Liang couldn't see his expression but heard a light sigh after a while. With mixed emotions, Song Qiyan backed away a bit and touched her forehead. He spoke in all seriousness, "Ok."
still too few chapters but i find it interesting so i'll wait for more chapters first
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Uncommon world setting, has traditional xianxia elements but is still unique (not in a gimmicky way like systems) Translation quality could be better as pronouns sometimes get mixed up. Looking forward to more chapters
please add some more chapters I've been waiting
Radueriel: You will leave in a moment but there is something you must know.
Very difficult to write because of all the research efforts that would go into it. I really commend your effort. Great work. I believe I have taken a lot from your work that I can use on a new work I'm already planning. Don't worry, I won't take too much ?. Thanks for your works.
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The author managed to build a very solid world, the scenarios are well described, I was captivated by the author's writing style, the mystery surrounding the ML and how the stiry unfolds as I read more. So far my advice would be to try reducing some paragraphs.
A very basic story in every sense. There is nothing outstandingly bad but nothing stands out as really good either. it lacks depth(no character building or world building) and progresses from one cliche to the next. After 20 chapters, nothing really interested me enough to continue. Overall, above average for this site but lacked enough appeal for me to continue.