A very unique concept instead of usual mc getting killed by a ' truck- kun ' scenario..I'm just fed up of those now...let's talk about this story , the world background and the characterisation of the entities feels new and fresh to me ..so I would recommend any new readers to give it a try as in my opinion you won't reget it.........
Simply Superb. I’m incredibly shocked that this isn’t on the top of the original stories rankings. The detail and story building especially as it pertains to the setting and character development are outstanding. You can really feel the amount of work the author put in this novel. Read this hidden gem and you’ll want for nothing.
I would say that this has potential but to the author maybe write longer chapters if possible and try to go mor in depth with the mc‘s personality and how he acts and I would love to see where you can take this story so keep it up
-love you from Salty/Nocito/Atreeus
♥️
Ótima história Mano continue assim ✌
So far, a promising read. The plot is intriguing, as well as concept. Text is understandable, but I would find myself rereading to get the gist. I suggest changing some sentence structure would do the trick. The narration could use some proofreading, since some transitions are rough.
Overall, an interesting read. Keep up the good work.
First and foremost i want to tell you that i binge read this up to 50chapsAnd trust I was frustrated beyond reasoningWhy? *Spoilers*I don't like Mc - He always lead by his nose, Author tried to make him too realistic that he forget when he passed the border of reasoning No romance or so even upto 50Even after interacting with 6 or 7 potential harem girls (or so the author portrayed them) his relationship with them doesn't increase a SINGLE BIT!He cut his ties with his two friends girls who are indicated to be in love with him in early chaps probably after getting frustrated or so the first girl loves him deeply but she cucked him and the second girl probably likes him but she does with his best friend jet and acted like nothing wrong, His fav Ms.teach already has a lover and he starts ignoring her, The strict Student councler is a slut in a real sense so he after an event he starts using her as a stress relief that's it, The girl who helped him from suicide starts showing some signs of "trouble"(that's what most probably author tried to show or I misunderstood which I highly not) before she starts distancing from mc,His step mom which also shows sign of getting 'flustered look' when he comes home early which shows she is also in 'trouble' but she didn't tell,Finally Mara the delinquent who falls for his previous self or something like this but then she starts leads him by nose in every way possible even though she loves him she still shows signs of 'trouble' and I don't know what author trying to do in ch42 that irked me SO MUCH she gets drunk and her two friends girls starts taking advantage of her body and records it before sending the mc (that vibes the disturbing ntr) after that the mc like always gets frustrated and cut ties with her because of that video late at night on phone callOverall this novel overly uses the raope and unwilling se.x trope and most of all it all happens with the every female character that interacts and makes a some bond with the mcAnd also he doesn't do anything to jet who spies on his pc and phone and betrayed him giving those access to the strict councilor who uses those access and erased the evidence that can result him to be expelled from the college which is a great deal to him and he acts like nothing when he meets him like SERIOUSLY Author if you want to make your novel more realistic you have failed really well and even after reading 50chaps the mc doesn't gives a damn to those who related to him and I'm... disappointed in himHe knows everything thing but still.. If author wanted to give an excuse that these all girls are "just potential harem girls" and not official then please let us know why wasted Up to 50chap this doesn't explain anything at all... just a disappointed reader
Deleted review deleted review ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
In my opinion, all the chapters have a unique and interesting idea. The story has creepy factors that make it more intriguing and exciting to read at the same time. The world itself felt quite alive and interesting to explore. The writing style in the story is some of the best writing styles in the book that I ever had and the flow of the story is pretty smooth and clear. The characters are also interesting to explore. Some of the chapters have a very good quality storyline and a unique plot twist.However, some of the chapters in the story have a kind of alright execution and some of the chapter ideas feel kind of bland or the plot twist is pretty expected.I think that's all I had to say about this story and Overall rating, in my opinion for this book is 8.7/10. Keep up a good work
I have read 6 chapters. The story is developing well. Stability is good as already 17 chapters have been published. Character design is good. The characters, at the moment only 3 have been introduced. Pace is good. World background is the present time (before the Virus in Wuhan).Writing quality is good. I did notice a few grammatical mistakes, but these did not interfere with the reading of the story. There is an issue with tenses. Mistakes do happen and the writer may not be able to see them. I have started to run the draft through a grammar checker before posting it.The story seems to be a gaming story with all those figures appearing. It is different. All the best.
This book has a lot of potential, The MC isn't conceited, show-off, or generic progatonist. He's patient and carefree, which emphasizes the humor behind his naivety. Haven't encountered face slapping scenes or other cliche events yet. It's quiet fun and refreshing to read, the MC's nonsense are pretty humorous and also characters' confusion and helplessness toward MC.