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As you start reading , you can tell the writing quality is quite high , the author does indeed have talent. Normally I would get excited whenever I encounter this level of writing because this tells me the author is capable to write at least a decent story and somewhat compelling characters. Once you have those elements ..other flaws can be more or less ignored. Well ...with all I said above this should have been at the minimum an ok novel for me to read ....and yet...I stopped at ch 22. Why? Due to the author's choice of MC. Within the first few chapters we have the interactions between the MC and the "first maid". In every interaction between them the MC is getting (to put it mildly) bullied , humiliated and extorted and yet he is getting more and more excited about her. This tells you everything you need to know about the MC. In short , the author presents the MC as being a generic , "lame"/ "beta"/ "doormat
I really agree with loli why present a small girl is it an interest if it is sorry I'll pass. The story has great potential. So I give 4.8 stars.
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i absolutly love this novel!!!!one of my all time favorite mc, great story, great interactions with other characters and really interesting side characters!I need more chapters ASAP
Hey guys, author here. I really hope that you guys enjoy this book. And it's also on wattpad and fanfiction.net. But I hope that you enjoy this book!
hahahahahaha finally, a harem novel from hideousgrain
Aight. This book and every other book written by this author are amazing. If you disagree, check your humor sense. It's sad that the translators dropped it. I loved this book. Hope it gets picked up by someone competent.
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oh wow, I didn't expect to see this here. Thanks for translating this story
I really liked the celestial emperor self cultivation novel.But sadly It is not picked.I hope this one get picked.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
I refuse to give a good review when the translator auterates the novel, such as altering the characters' names..........................................
