I love this story please continue writing it I beg of you it’s all I have been reading recently.
Shameless author Review
This story is about a guy who unexplainably becomes stronger too fast. He is seen as a genius, even though his talent would actually have kicked him out for being too bad. He does not even work hard and is very lazy. Additionally, he likes to show off how strong he is, even though he did not achieve anything himself. Frankly, he was quite stupid to force himself to progress so fast, since it draws too much attention to him. It would have been far wiser to learn the shield in like 5 days, placing him at record-breaking pace, without making as many people question how he is able to learn so fast. The biggest issue I had was with how the teachers treated him differently. If someone makes a mistake, then they should be punished instead of turning this into an opportunity to gloat. Anyways, it is just very badly written. I would rate this a 1.5 on my own rating system.
I would also like to add, that this is a fanfic, but it gets locked later on behind a paywall... I think Disney could sue for this...
I loved this novel, but I need more than what was left by the ending. What happened after yin stabbed himself in the heart? What is the meaning of the system saying live and then the author stating it's too late for that. we know he's dead, but was he given the proper honor he deserved, or was there a way for yin to return through the system? So many questions left unanswered.
It is a fantastic work u guy should read it
9.7/10 for me no system, realistic world
Mc is a hardworking, good mindset
for the Author u should make teammates have more personality (rival or something)
my English is not that good but im trying haha
I liked the story , the MC has a very human development , his lines are not robotic , it seems that the titles are duplicated , I do not know if it 's just for me , but apart from the little post of chapters the rest is very good , it reminded me of world war 1 the bottom of the world keep up the hard work
Ummm, What Can I Say, What A Wonderful story ❤❤
I'm so glad to be the first to leave a review on this amazing work. Even though the synopsis was brief the book itself wasn't disappointing. I love the title and I'm looking forward to more chapters author.
This is great, a bit late on update but still great... Love the story line
Its like the author just writes down half the story without any concern for how the readers are supposed to get the full picture. A poor immitation of a magic school anime.
Really good read. Not often I find VRMMORPG novels where the MC truly solos which I honestly like more than party or guild building. The POV shifts are pretty smooth and doesn't interrupt the story. Also the MC's real life seems more realistic considering the family isn't too perfect but also not extremely flawed.
The story development is a bit slow but that what makes it more interesting. This is my first time reading a crime novel and I think I found the right book for me. This is an actual good book. Nice work, author.