Legacy of the Shattered Cosmos

The story was fine up until a point. It was a relatively upbeat story about a guy exploring Buddism and interacting with people using Buddist principles. Unfortunately, the story becomes much more nationalist, and begins to defies/rewords buddist teachings to better excuse things that the nationalist writer seems to think is fine. I liked it up to a point, but then I didn't.

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This story is amazing, the characters feel genuine at least the main and secondary ones the rest don't really matter lol. The different Qi's reminds me of reverend Insanity which is cool however what I didn't like was the author making the the MC's assistant start with fire qi which is constantly used by every mc out there and it's just annoying seeing as he had 6 elements to chose from and he chose fire but it's fine just a minor thing. As for world building it's very good but I just hooe the author doesn't introduce stuff too quick and then gets overwhelmed by everything and then forgets about something. Story is developing nicely I just really wish to see more of the family. Also going back to the Qi's I really wish that the author introduces more characters with uncommon qi types like poison,sound,wood,water etc However these are just my preferences and the author can do what he wants. As for the updates they are very frequent just that the chapters are short or atleast they feel short. but the quality isn't really dropping so just keep doing what your doing author and you'll be fine

honestly I like the jokes in this novel like it's good you should add some more comedy things (i will support ya as much as I can)

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