Good story so far, looking forward to the MC leveling up and the evolution of the world throughout the story! I like his family and am looking forward to their restaurant:p
This was a disappointing read, throughout the entire story, the MC, Miles, literally has no character development, and he makes dumb choices that either injure his pets and himself, for example, besides the beginning, he does not ever use his Attractiveness Value again, if he would just use it, so many problems could have been avoided, he is literally refusing to use his Golden Finger/his cheat. There are so many useful things he could've done with his system that he just ignores. And the villains, side characters, love interests are all as generic as they come, the villains are a group of people that he somehow offends and manages to encounter every time. The side characters are mostly all arrogant, constantly changing sides whenever someone says something dumb about the MC, the love interests are overall annoying as usual, constantly hindering the MC's development. Lastly, he always causes the problem that he puts himself in, and honestly, I could go on and on, but overall, just a bad read, slightly decent in the beginning, but just continues to degrade as the story continues since the Author obviously has no idea what to do next.
The novel was great until the whole thing with Karena happened and MC basically became her slave. I lost all interest after that.
Honestly a good idea and got high potential, but everything change after the school arc. Suddenly turned to beast master system, no more rune, the story just jumped around the place. So much for friendship, he didn't even talked to his friend anymore. Not worth your money.
so the dear trash Author deletet my post how about you delete the spam bots you have you pathatic peace of ****.So back to my previus revie you have here people that dont even read your novel and give it 5 stars i do the same but i give you 0 well 1 in this cease because i cant give 0 here you go
I had only read up to pair games (almost 20 chapters). The reason is simple.1. Grammar sucks. Author either is at A2 level of english or just uses GTranslate. Possibly both. No, it's more like he is B1 for a paragraph and then, the next paragraph is straight out of MTL.2. Trans. This is just my personal preference, but I am not really into *Spoiler* 40-old man leaning on our young mc, falling in love with him, turning girl outside games, falling in love even more, and turning into 40-year old man in-game. Those conversations of:" Would you marry me if I turned back to man?" Made me sick. Again, this is not sickening to anyone (obv, since author seems to have such fetish), but to me, it is. Whoever reads this, be careful, cuz they may even kiss in the near future in their male forms. *Spoiler*Outside of that, the idea was good. Actually good. No wonder it won the prize. Author, if you wish to actually make it big, please just don't do sick things and find a proper editor or use a software, I recommend grammarly.
. Like this story. Hope it gets picked. Cats>Dogs . Would be nice if it gets picked because i want to read this story .
Your story premise is fine, world building and character development are okay except the main character. For someone who is super smart and a doctor he acts like a f*cking moron. I get his desire to be doctor n such but he doesn't seem to be adapting or more like he is deluding himself and be willfully ignorant, it makes it hard to read the story. And what happened in the cube with the girl, the cube gave him info about what he could do to d girl n d potential negative effects 4 her and being a doctor he still couldn't get himself under control... I mean seriously?! With all d harping he's done about his dream of being a doctor n d reason he gave why, one would think he would have more self control...smh.Anyways good story but cos of d mc I doubt I'll be able to continue reading
never seen a mc more cowardly and useless, even dense jp mc have more backbone...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
well it seems nice but I couldn't read past the first chapter they say their whole name every time and it something eastern cant tell if its chinese or Japanese but its their whole name every time even in chinese or japanese novels they do nt say the whole name! it makes it imposible for me to read
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Can't really do a review after 2 chapters but it does interest me enough to read it when it's updated.There are very few mistakes in grammar and the descriptions are not too many but enough at least for my taste. Anyway I hope you can at least kerp up with this kind of quality in the future if not better.