"These are my rights as a witness to a crime? What if I were a criminal myself?" Malaguard refuses to answer; she simply repeats the same speech. "OK, I get it. Get me a set of royal whites and give Joe Dove a call. I want his help on this. I really don't know what is going on, and Joe seems like an upfront sort of guy."
Frustrated by his failure. He walks and walks around cultivating his will as time flows as is it.
"The man I like was just here." She forced herself to say.
Jens : "What are those children? You must have some knowledge about the Children of Eden, right? What is that place? What are those children? And… Who even, is Eden?"
I’m gonna list a few points right off the bat: Translation is horrendous coming from a site that pushes these kind of novels.Speeches are sentences that doesn’t even read smoothly. As if one just translated purely from the rates with little to minor editing done on this part.Characters are not that memorable since I’ve read ahead and i must say, really disappointing personas.I would only read this if god and hell says so.
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First six chapters show great promise in my opinion. The MC is a unique dragon that will find it hard to exist as almost all factions benefit from killing him. I wonder how it will go. Writing quality is very good.
Good storyline so far with great character and plot
it was a tragic experience but so good. i would love to read more of this. I almost cried while reading this, they all deserve much more.. _______________________________________
A genuinely good read so far. Looks like the author's shooting for 1-2 chapters daily, which is a great pace. The writing is also great, it gives a lot of context without being an absolute info dump. Other than the slow start (Chapters 1-2, and a bit of 3), this story really does have good potential. Solid 9/10 for me, highly recommended.
Average, nothing new or outstanding, quite similar to Tyranny of Steel, but I'll reserve my judgement for now and see where it goes in the future