There are little to none grammatical errors, the story devolpment is really interesting and novel, the charachet design is well made and the characters aren't 2d, What can i say? I only wish to see more chapters!
Who's the author of this fcking piece of ****!!!! ....... wasted my time fckerr!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!??!!!!!!!!!!!!¡
super boring and time waste as MC himself is a play boy and trash
An interesting take on mcu,but you could use a little improvement on the grammar and paragraph spacing. All is good though and keep it up good story
300+ Chapter Read ReviewWriting Quality: 4/5In the beginning chapters the writing quality was not the best but I can see that it has gone up in quality as the author has written more throughout the novel.Stability of Updates: 5/5The novel updates often and constantly.Story Development 4/5 and World Background: 5/5I have to say that I am really enjoying the story development and the world background. It is clear to me that the author has put a great deal of thought especially into the world background, the relationships between the races, relationships between gods, and how all the characters interact with each other. But I have to say that the "real life" side of things is rather lacking. It felt like some things came out of no where as if to give the main character some form of conflict or inner battle.Character Design 4/5:I actually enjoy that the author sometimes dedicates entire chapters to other characters perspectives such as the main character's best friend, his cousin, or another top player in the game. I like the interactions between characters, their own unique personalities, and their own unique roles in the gaming world. But the main character's over luckiness at the beginning of the novel was kind of a disappointment. It was exactly when he needed something that he got it shortly after. It does seem that the author has gotten away from this though in the later chapters so kudos!Summary:Give it a try! I know that the beginning few chapters may be a bit rough and the main character plot armor is a bit irritating at first but it does improve. I do not regret picking up this novel and I plan to keep reading!
story would be so much better if the MC was not fawning over Zhao Ying. I mean. He should be old enough to not be such an idiot. Or at least to not be attracted to short sighted, vapid girls. I mean. She keeps looking down on him, thinks skills or martial arts are better than intelligience/knowledge. Even when he beats other people in combat she looks down on him. She is always following around his enemy, who is arrogant and like to bully and look down on others... I mean. Either she is not as good and kind as she appears to be, or she is to ****** minded to have any real character of her own with which to express opinions that do not line up with Zhuo Fei Yangs. Honestly, at no point in the story does her character come off as attractive or appealing. I cannot see an intelligient individual actively pursuing or even liking someone like that.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Status: 1200+ chapters , completed, epic storylineMC isn't an unfeeling blob nor is he an edgy psycho.Falls into the neutral or chaotic good camp, so sorry if you wanted a villain. However i feel that this story has perfect balance between its many elements. What I like is that the mc makes a genuine connection with the world and people around him and there are plenty of likable side characters. The villains provide a real sense of threat despite the mc being quite OP to be frank. One of my biggest complains with trial read webnovels is that often times the only interesting part of the story is the power system, the world building or some other gimmicky mechanics, and while that is enough to keep my interested in the starting part of the story, once the mc becomes powerful enough i just stop caring, it's not just about lowered stakes its also cause some mc don't really form any meaningful connections or friends or have anything that they genuinely care about, which imo is a very important part of having a soulful and engaging narrative.This story has that good stuff, it's not too much but its there, which makes it worth it.Do give it a try.
Kinda weird to review your own since I'll definitely be biased towards it but anyway! This is my first work that I've published and I'll continue on publishing chapters daily and hopefully accomplish the dream to land a contract with Webnovel. This is a great story to read to pass the time and I hope you add this to your library.A few bits written there is actually from my real experience with handling guns, close-combat fighting, farming, etc. I just enhanced it a bit to... well you know the reason why(I suck at it irl). XDBy the way, please drop a review so I could learn what you think and I appreciate you all for taking the time reading something from a complete beginner. Thanks!
Nice cover and an even better read.
good read.
This book is something else, love it sooo much