1 chapter in and i couldn't force myself to read more...the writing quality is horrendous enough to cause a headache. I'm aware that english isn't the author's native language, but even a cursory skimming at chapter 1 will reveal atleast 50+ mistakes...and its not just grammatical mistakes, there are even mistakes for something as basic as gender mentions: where the MC is referred by "her" instead of "his" a lot of times in just the first chapter...Still this is not the worst english writing i've read, but its almost reaching the worse ones...And about the "English is not my 1st language" excuse, although i've seen countless authors use that i still don't understand how that logic works...You're writing on an english platform, so you should atlest learn basic English grammar and writing skills before you decide to post a half-as*ed story and not use more advanced and difficult words to make is easier on yourself...Thats all.?
The story is epic! The characters? Awesome! Writing quality? Amazing! Story development? Out of this world! I absolutely love it! Can’t wait to see what happens to our main characters next! Both the main couple and side couples are perfect! Please don’t ever drop this! ?
Amazing storyline, would like to see what's next for Audrey and Aiden
Brother you are a good writer. I want to give you five star but I am deducting this only because you started premium from 28th chapter,at least you can start from 50. Do inform me when you are limited free for a day. Thank you .
I have given this novel 40 chapters but it was still not able to grip me, I just don't know how this is a 2nd most popular novel in the rankings, it's super boring and slow
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Keep it up,keep it up your story is very good and it a great storyline I hope you dont drop it. Guided by the way of MCs to supremacy . Love it, love it, love it, dont drop, don't drop, dont drop dont drop dont drop
I am the author of this story. It is still under development. I would appreciate any constructive criticism. Not mean and nasty but actual advice about the points of review. Thanks! ?
A very good story to keep up the Halloween spirit burning plus it has some really spooky scares and very suspenful with a well developed plot to come up with such a short story and still manage to capture more than it can hold.
Its a pretty average story loaded with tons of references to other authors work. The author does say this him/her self in the comments of nearly each chapter. Which I can only give him/her Big praise for. The biggest Problem i have with it is that these tropes and refernces are just stacked behind each other without much strings between. It read like Multiple storys after each other without fleshing out of any Charakter. Maybe sometime I'll force my self to understand the plot but as of now I am dropping the story At the 30iest chapter Mark.Yours sincrrely,
U need read before turning down a title, this 5 star to balance the ratings. But, u can choose to read da status guy. And why a review need to have more than 140 damn word, ffs.