Love this novel , it’s the embodiment of my taste villain mc, no harem, no romance and a sensible mc . Good luck author
I like the story, so just giving some support to the author and keep up the good work !
it was better before the change and only forty some odd chapters free just goes to show some things are to good to be true
You have a good idea. I feel like I am not in the story. I am suggesting that you try to show instead of telling what characters are doing. here is website
http://***.wright.edu/~david.wilson/eng3830/creativewriting101.pdf
Definitely a copy and paste. Starts the same way and everything. I forget the name of the other story but unfortunately it's the same.
I did give this a read, but after the first chapter, I kept recalling the other story.
Based solely upon the first chapter and the synopsis, it sounds exceedingly similar to 'IRASS'. However, in execution, it is quite good. The writing style flows well and the paragraphs are correctly spaced. Though the quality of grammar is slightly sub par, the story and character development seem solid. Good job if this is your first novel!
Seems like a lot of fun, cant wait for more.
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solid 4 star , entertaining and amusing the world building is interesting but not the best out there maybe it is just my opinion if you like the power system them this novel is for you
This is bloody awesome finally another attack on titan in game of thrones there is only one other that I know of it’s call wolves and titans
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Just finished all the chapter unti now. I have only one thing to say, I NEED MOREEEEEE
Hahaha