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It's terrible. Don't even try.
Zero proof reading, incomprehensible dialogue, none of the characters have a functioning personality, and even the smut is poorly done.
wow ok it's awsome. the quality and story is all good. it feels like im reading very popular novel. This story makes the readers want to keep reading.
Time to guess all the possible real names of the members.
Handsome Guy With Lightning Bolt should be Zeus.
Dominator of the Sea is of course Poseidon, he is the most famous.
Grandpa With Magical Power is Odin, due to being portrayed as quite old and knows about Ragnorok, an event only in Norse mythology.
A Fireball In My Hand... should be Prometheus, as he "gave" the fireball to humanity, which was the creation of fire.
Most Beautiful Goddess should be Aphrodite, in mythology considered the most beautiful greek goddess. Her comparison is between her Roman name ( Venus ) with Athena, one of the other few relevant goddesses.
Golden apple should be based on the legend of the golden apple, of which it eliminates most gods, leaving only Athena, Hera, and Aphrodite. Due to Athena's divinity being war and wisdom, the only one left should be Hera.
Edit : Golden Apple and Most Beautiful Goddess, Hera and Aphrodite can be intermatched.
its a beta mc who became a dog when his infront of a female, he was attacked by a female who was targeting a boar when he just login because of the place he logout previously and what did he do in the end he gave free equipment to the female player because his a dog,
1 star. Why copy Legendary Mechanic bruh...............................................................................................................
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Well it is quite good . MC personality is also good not like Chinese arrogant MC like I will never bow to anyone . Well it also has many mysterious upper realms which is quite good I just want to read it faster I can't contain my excitement and also FMC is also good she is quite talented at leagues of true geniuses.
Overall love it keep it up author-san and release more chapters pl...
I don't read Sci-fi at all. As it's not my favourite genre or anything but let me tell you this is really very different then what I thought. The concept of virus and it's effect. the writing style and flow of the sentences are just amazing. it came really smoothly without any mistakes. I must say I recommend this to all whoever like Sci-fi this is a gems for them.