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The books doesn’t have one set writing style and is rather choppy in terms of flow. The word choice and storyline is poor, and the characters lack personality. Even if someone were to be strong and opinionated, there should be a bit of common sense. If the emperor was being abused, that would’ve been an instant death or sentence, imperial concubines have more status than commoners, she hadn’t officially taken the position as imperial nanny but acted as if she was all that…??? She barged into the throne room but there was no announcement from the eunuch. The world background is confusing because the book is set in imperial times with concubines and the likes, yet has traces of modern influences such as; busses, women getting ”diplomas”, and modernized wording. There is no build up for each character, no story, and no personality. you know a book is good if you get lost in the world created by the author, I feel like I haven’t been able to step into the world and immerse myself.
*If you want the short version of this message skip to the last paragraph*I wanted to write this review just because I reread the first chapter and saw a few negative comments already judging the novel within 10 paragraphs.I will say that this has been, hands-down, one of, if not, the best web novel I've read. The writing style is refined, though it does blip once every so often. The character creation can see improvement, but it doesn't just completely rely on plot-armor to solve everything. Yes, there's convenient misunderstandings and escape routes, but, well, obviously the author isn't going to kill off the MC out of nowhere. The world creation is clear, because the author bases it off already existing history with some tweaks. Definitely some controversial subjects that are touched upon that might make some people feel weird, but if you keep an open-mind you'll definitely appreciate the writing.I am fully caught up (186 chapters at the time of writing this) and it is definitely worth the read.10 CHAPTERS. Just give this novel a read for 10 chapters, and you'll appreciate it for what it's worth. Just like with the 3 episode rule with anime, let's apply it here. Thank you for coming to my TedTalk.
Good story highly recommend for people who love game element but no recommend for those who love harem. It this story great yes for me. /Sike -_-/heeee exp
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Good novel keep the good work and thank you for your hard work <3
The novel is good and no harem which make it more good along with league of legends! I read the review and Idk what to say to them....... their review is somehow stupid for me.
Ummmmmmmm, i don't know it's great. I love it. Used great words........ And I really don't know what to say I'm just writing nonsense just to reach the minimum number of characters hehe...But, it's great!???
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I dont like the fact that the mc lose his past memories because he is very naive afterwards and tells a random old stranger at the academy his secrets x)))))
And he is way to friendly.. everything else is ok but the mc character is just trash in my eyes
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