This novel apparently will be promising. I read until chapter 40 and I didn't had any issue, althought I can't understand about translation quality (because my English is not the better) all the others parts seems good. The start isn't a cliche and the characters are not bad. if something very bad doesn't happen in the course of history, this will probably be a good novel
This is really good keep up the good work people like this are meant to be given a chance in the writing industry ...
It was a solid start to what I believe would be an interesting adventure. Teslan was a fascinating character, I appreciated how realistic his character were. The way he express his feelings in every words, his dreams, his wants, the eagerness to prove himself, even his frustrations and even his hurt and self-pity on being rejected.
I would love to follow more of Teslan's story, how he'll eventually find his own space in this crazy world and earn his worth.
Okay so originally this book was written by imnotpoppunk on wattpad but they decided to delete their account and gave me a copy of it. Which I then later on decided to share it with others since I fell in love with it and want to share their story with others.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
This can be considered the best novel I've ever read in till now. It has op mc and this is just enough to make me read it. It also has a good harem, op cultivation technique, and a better explanation of Daos. I seriously want web novel to translate this novel more.
The story is good and I love reading game novels! Keep it up author! The way you make the Arnis as a game is so cool! And I think you should put VRMMORPG to be exact!
I do not mean that this is a bad novel by any means, and you could say the author
only used it for inspiration,
but its just like a carbon copy of
“The Rise Of The Sheild Hero” (on CrunchyRoll) Way to many similarities. but good novel dispite that.
The low grade is only because or the unmistakable similaritys.
An amazing novel that we can look upon to. The story is still developing and still has a lot to offer as the story progress. But this is my initial rate to the author to show my support.
REVIEWNarration: Decent and immersiveWorldbuilding: Vast and detailedCharacter development: Nice and steadyCharacter design: OutstandingDialogues: Realistic and LifelikePacing: Not fast nor too slowWriting quality: MagnificentExecution of the Genre: Good pitchStory potential: HighUpdating Stability: SteadyMESSAGEThis is nich and nice man. Hope it gets the exposure it deserves! Congrats on winning WPC! Hehehe, I am waiting for it to reach a million views!
The translation on this novel is horrible, characters switched between male and female constantly, incoherent sentences, it was just bad. If you read English above a 2nd grade lvl good luck...
Nice work. Nice concept and plot. I'm liking this! I have always been a big fan of dark and overpowered characters. Keep it up author. Please update frequently
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