The synopsis caught my interest and I can't stop reading after the first chapter with this badass MC. The story flowed well and the amazing translation quality piques my curiosity too.
Thanks for translating this wonderful novel~ :D
You've got quite a good book there Rachy. And I am happy you were among those who won the contest.
This book is awesome. I think this is the author's first gaming novel and she sure os doing a great job.
If you haven't read, then I do not know what u are waiting for... Come on and read, good work author.
The story development is utterly slow. The character is too flawed and unrelatable. If you made him a bit smarter this could work out. Without his cheat I can see him dying from tripping on a branch. Yeah i know this comes with character development. But from what I see he lacks self preservation. Buying useless skills instead of something that could help him adapt to his situation and new found power. He doest even have a sense of urgency. When all he cares about is internet and hot springs thats clearly a bad sign. The only good part is your superb writing and fast update speed.
I read all the 60 Pre-Released chapters and liked it very much. So I thought why not read it in MTL. And this is my review after completing the novel.
This novel has about 1000 chapters out of which I only read about 600 chapters in detail then I just scrolled the Table Of Contents and read the chapters according to the Chapter Title (for various reasons). So although I know the Basic Summary but I don't know in detail what happened between Chapter 600-1000.
Now lets discuss about the World Structure, Cultivation Realms, Power Structure.
World Structure & Power Structure :- (P.S: I don't know much detail about Power structure because Main Sects appear after Chapter 600)
1. Spirit Continent/Realm (Same Ancient Land where Dragon Emperor asked Lin Han to go for Revenge)
This is the main continent of the world in which the story takes place. 3000 years ago after Ice God colluding with Old Man of Time & Space killed Dragon Emperor(secretly), Ancient Dragon Dynasty became chaotic because of mysterious disappearance of Dragon Emperor. Then Ice God came to quell the unrest and after killing many she established her own dynasty which rules the continent, Frost Divine Dynasty.
The Continent is divided into five parts namely Eastern, Western, Southern, Northern, Central.
2. Lingwu Continent/Domain/Island (MC's Continent)
There are countless islands floating in the endless sea around Spirit Continent. They are called Domains. Lingwu Domain is just one of the domain out of countless others.
It falls under the control of Shenwu Qianzhuang, which is a major power of Eastern Wasteland (one of the five sectors of Spirit Realm). There are many Shenwu Academies (branch of Shenwu Qianzhuang) on the Domain through which qualified disciples can go to Shenwu Qianzhuang.
Just like Spirit Realm, Lingwu Domain is also divided into 5 sectors, Eastern, Western, Southern, Northern & Central.
3. Southern Sector of Lingwu Domain (MC's Sector)
The Southern Region has 17 states, and Xuezhou is the smallest of the 17 states.
4. Xuezhou State (MC's State)
There are hundreds of millions of territories in the State, and the Dajin Empire is located in the center of Xuezhou.
5. Dajin Empire (MC's Empire)
The most powerful overlord power in the Empire are called "One Sect, Two Palaces, and Three Halls" by the world.
"One Sect" refers to Qiankun Jianzong(MC joins this sect).
"Two Palaces" refers to the Divine Phoenix Heaven Palace(Lin Ruyan's Mother is from this place) and the Nine Nether Magic Palace.
"Three Halls" refers to the Hall of Lord Zun, the Hall of Warlords and the Hall of Corpse Yan.
Dajin Empire controls many territories one of which is Yan Kingdom and Tianhou Kingdom/Empire.
6. Tianhou Kingdom/Empire(MC joins a sect in here according to his master's wish)
Most Powerful one is The Royal Family. Except for The Royal Family there are 4 other sects. 4 ancestors of these sect has to fight together to be on equal ground with The Emperor.
The sects are Tian Jianmen (MC's sect), Iron Sect, Tianqin Valley(It's Valley Master is Lin Ruyan's Father), True Demon Sect.
7. Yan Kingdom (MC's Kingdom)
It's the Kingdom from where MC is. In this kingdom Chiyang King(MC's Master) is the most powerful man even more powerful than The Emperor.
MC is from the southern most border village named Changyun Village's Lin Family which is a branch of Broken Sky City Lin Family.
Cultivation Base:- (P.S: I don't know cultivation base mentioned after chapter 600)
1) Martial Realm
1.1) 9 sub-realms (each divided into Initial, Intermediate, Late, Peak)
2) True Martial Realm
2.1) 2 sub-realms namely Earth & Sky (each divided into Initial,
Intermediate, Late, Peak)
3) Spiritual Martial Realm
3.1) 3 sub-realms namely Spiritual Realm, Spiritual Wheel Realm,
Soul Realm
3.2) Sub-realms are further divided into 9 realms
4) Dongtian Realm(9 sub-realms)
5) Supernatural / Magical Realm
5.1) 4 sub-realms namely Linghai, Jingu, Sixiang, Hualong
5.2) Sub-realms are further divided into 9 heavens
6) *Holy Realm (Yin-Yang Holy Realm, Nirvana Holy Realm)
Till chapter 600 MC didn't even touch this realm so I don't know much about this realm and after it.
Now let's talk about Plot development.
1. MC was a trash who was stuck at 1st Heaven of Martial Realm for One Whole Year but after getting Art of Ancient Dragon Emperor, he was able to brakethrough Dongtian Realm within 2.5 Years.
Remember, MC didn't inherit Dragon Emperor's Memory or Experience. He only got a Dragon Soul(which increased his Soul cultivation & comprehension talent) and a Cultivation Art. So MC's cultivation talent is still trash.
2. No Bottleneck Exist for MC. As long as there is enough Spirit Stones MC can breakthrough Continuously. No need to care about Solid Foundation. Withing 9 months, MC brokethrough True Martial Earth Realm(newly advanced) to Spiritual Wheel Realm(got into Rank 76 of Top 100).
3. Nothing Challenging. MC can fight above his level and most villains are within his fighting range. And those scare ones who aren't, they can't attack MC due to various reasons. And when they finally attack, they are way below MC's Combat Power.
4. There will be few times when you will think that the complete scenario is very forced.
5. He finally sleeps with Lin Ruyan in Chapter 324 but tells her that He will marry her after reaching Peak of Martial Arts. As for other Females, MC has no romance with them(until chapter 600. after that I don't know).
6. Finally the Shitty Finale. You Can be the judge of that. Just read these two with Google Translate.
CH 998 :- https://***.uukanshu.com/b/68245/90594.html (This is The Chapter Previous to Finale)
Finale:- https://***.uukanshu.com/b/68245/91407.html
After reading these two you will understand that YOU SHOULD NOT PUT THIS NOVEL ON YOUR LONG TERM READING LIST.
Thank You.
Interesting premise, what if the supernatural was or became real? Well that is exactly what our MC goes through. The pacing is quick but a little strange in the first chapters. A good horror story novel reminciestt of My House of Horror, and lacks a system, but certainly with its own cheat. I suggest reading up to chapter 10.
Hi. As for the review you asked.
First, I absolutely loathe the whole ‘level up/stats' thing. When I found out your novel was following this path, it disappointed me a lot. But it’s my preference, and not a problem on how you write it. I decided not to read after reaching chapter 8.
You write very well and I hope you know it. It’s fluid and coherent, so I feel I have little to review on this part.
Now, about the plot. It’s intriguing to a certain extent, but perhaps a bit tiresome. A reader needs ups and downs to breath. But the first 8 chapters are a lot of ups. Keeping readers on their toes for a long made them mentally tired. And perhaps they don’t return to your book because it makes them holding their breath for too much time. It’d be good to intertwine with some humor or whatever.
From what I read, there are two points that bothered me a bit, but after start reading chapter 8, I think only one is really important to mention. The first chapter.
It’s not interesting nor made me thirsty for more. I found the part about the aboriginal tribe a better enticing introduction that the glimpse of future in the first chapter. I advise you to check with other readers their opinion about it as well. First chapters are crucial for getting readers.
Anyway, your book is not everyone’s cup of tea, but is fairly well written and I wish you success.
Just more garbage. Don't waste your time and money reading this.
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Should you give it a try? only 65% I will recommend it! There are some grammar error, poor word choice and mistakes but I see that author was also aware of this problem and tried to fix it. I know it also quite hard to write in a language that is not your native.It's quite interesting novel and I will follow it for sure
It happens to be 9:26 AM when I'm writing this. I realized I had 8 reviews and that I can write another review at 11:00 AM where I am and will have ten reviews. I'm giving myself 5 stars because it's faster, and it will also increase my rating. This story deserves a high rating because I worked on it! Every author feels the same way! Give us all 5 stars please! hahahaha! In an hour, I will have 10 reviews! Then the spell of 10 reviews will be complete and you can see my rating!
Personally, I think wildfires are terrible. But this is just a work of fiction so it’s fine... right?
Hmm. This story has an interesting read. Someone who becomes a sword, I can't wait to see how he will live his life. The mc too has an interesting character and can be fleshen up more. The introduction of the world background is also written well. The narratives too is easy portrayed to the readers.Writing quality, there are grammatical errors though it didn't much hinder you to enjoy reading this but you could still improve it. Overall, this book has a great and interesting start. I love to see this one grow more chapters and a must keep in my collections. And if you are a fan of transmigration and cultivation stories, then this one is definitely recommended.Keep it up author!