This was better than I expected. The only downside I see is the chapters are too short. Keep it up [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I think writer should elaborated on things, make details and re-read what your write and adding some word that make reader interesting in them. Theres so many cultivation story out there, compare your writing, to me, your writing is just 2.5 but your story, OMG! I give full mark for them coz I juz got hook by the background story.... well done for that. This is not criticism but a constructive comment based on what I read. Sorry if u hurt and thank U for this story! Keep on it! Good work! U juz need Xperience, so just write. Cheers!!
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Misleading title and synopsis in my opinion.
Mc is not a real Young Master because he doesn’t act like one after a few chapters he is your normal mc that struggle and fight to get stronger and even his young master act has a sob story behind it.
I thought this would have a arrogant mc that has backing and comedy but it’s normal survival apocalypse story.
What a fun xianxia novel! You did a great job! I can’t help myself sneaking reading it at work! Such a shame that not much people found this novel yet.... Hopefully,,, more and more readers can get to read it!!
Once again,great job!
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I liked the plot, it gives us the glimpse of the horrible effects of war, causing families to torn apart and the trauma that the young childen has to go through. Although, I think the paragraphs are too long, some readers tend to skip long chaps. Also, I got lost sometimes in the middle of dialogue tags but overall the story has feels to it. Lastly, I kind of wanting to know how the two brothers cope up in those 5 years after losing their father. This is a good read!
Here is the Author's biased review. At first I wanted to drop this book, since there was a lot of rejection due to the theme and setting of the book. It's a rated 18, it's harem. You know what, I'm just gonna push it and see where it goes. Hopefully with the support of readers, I can see this to the end.
only one element are you serious and its fire come on trash trash trash . mmmgddffdddfffggdghgghgghggghhgghhhhhhgggggghhhggggggggggggggghhggg
it gives a little of shadow slave's vibes mmm it has potential to say it seemed like everything is planned from the author let's see.....
I like this novel a lot so far. The MC is fairly fun and has a neat outlook on a lot of situations. While a lot of the same old tropes are hit, they are usually met with some unique or interesting twist. As long as the quality doesn't dip I can't complain about this book. Very good read.
An excellent novel. In modern times, cultivation is one of the best of novels. Its potential is very good. Its future is a deep story. Publishing speed is slow. I can't wait for new episodes.